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Lucky – Chapter 36 (Final one)
After dinner Bette had lowered the lights and lit the fire. She sat on the sofa, while Tina knelt and pleasured her.
The blonde finally crawled up onto the brunette’s lap, and they discussed the rest of the weekend.
The basic premise would be that Tina was to serve her captee in everyway possible. Although they were both taking it seriously Tina couldn’t help antagonizing her lover. Bette finally decided the blonde needed to be put in her place, in preparation for the following morning. She walks her to the top floor, a place Tina is already coming to fear and love.
After feeling the wrath of Bette’s hand on her behind, Tina is finally guided to the corner of the room. “Kneel” Bette helps her down on to the soft rug, loving the sight before her. She looks at the blonde’s reflection, the beautiful skin and blindfold securely in place. This mirror was purely for Bette’s satisfaction, to see her lover’s every response. She edges Tina’s legs apart. Already happy at her girlfriend’s arousal she places the dildo to her entrance and with force enters her, grasping on to hips.
“Fuhhhhh” The blonde’s body lurches forward, her head dropping down.
Bette continues to move in and out fast, wanting to see more of her lover she pulls her up, holding her hair tightly, her other hand around the blonde’s waist.
Tina’s hands hold onto to the strong grip in her hair.
The site in the mirror over Tina’s shoulder is beautiful. The blonde is totally at her mercy.
Sweat begins to cover their bodies as Bette finally falls forward, careful not to put too much weight on the exhausted body below. Within just a few minutes their breathing begins to pick up as their bodies begin to shake. They both lay there for sometime before Bette found the energy to lift a sleeping Tina into the warm bed.
The following morning things were immediately different. “Hey”, Tina feels someone roughly rustling her hair and pushes the hand off. “Hey!” Bette repeats.
“Fuck off” Tina moans.
Not a good idea.
The blonde feels the duvet lifted off. She turns over seeing a recently woken Bette.
“What?” She asks angrily, forgetting momentarily their conversation the night before.
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already the end and I just caught up…very close indeed.Thanks
Thank you for the entertainment Bayley. Loved this story with both it’s naughty and loving elements. Good luck with your next endeavor and we look forward to your next story, whenever that may be. :)
That story was just delicious, and very daring, I must say! I enjoyed it, and also the push and pull of Bette and Tina’s relationship in this story. What so many don’t understand is that the game is absolutely imperative for some. It doesn’t shock or scare when done correctly, and the consensual nature of your story makes that very clear. Tina wants and needs that struggle, and Bette needs to give it to her. It’s the perfect balance, and it has made for a lovely story, along with all of the priceless comedy that has made this journey truly unique. Thank you for posting, and good luck on your project. You’ve been brave to share, and I know I’m not alone when I say that I’m glad you did.
Thank You! Thank You! Thank yo! I’m so happy and so sad all at the same time. Happy you posted but sad you r done for now… Wish you luck on your project and hope to see you back here soon… I along with so many have really enjoyed your story and your out of the box take on B&T…Thanks for sharing and looke forward to reading more when you come back to the world of fanfic xox :)
Thank you for this story, it was really enjoyable and funny to read.
i love this story but why you have to finish? please make a sequel!!!!!!
I’ve thoroughly enjoyed every chapter of this story! You have done a tremendous job of maintaining the balance between Bette and Tina. In each chapter, you made it obvious how much they cared for one another. Although I’m sad to see the words final chapter, I wish you well in all your projects and hope one day you will find the time and desire to once again share your writing with us. Thank you so much!
Please continue writing.This story was so much fun.Thank you and good luck.
That was awesome and love it, thanks for sharing this story with us, hope to see you soon with a new happy B&T, Thanks!
Thank you for this story.
I have to admit, your story had me a little freaked out. After reading it through then going back to reread it, I was looking from the wrong angle. Awesome story Bayley! I hope you don’t wait too long to post another great story. You and GR are what’s been missing from the site :)
Hey Bayley, It has been a true pleasure and joy to read and comment on this brilliant adventure. I do hope that you get the time to felsh out a bachlorette celebration for Bette and Tina as well as their weddign and honeymoon delights. Thank you so much for making me smile everytime I saw a new post from you. Your Loyal Fan.
Great naughty story, one of my fav! Sad that it’s over but hope you’ll post something soon;)) Loved how you made them appear regular to the outside world;))