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Lucky – Chapter 36 (Final one)
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“It’s time for you to begin serving me, you rude shit” Bette says calmly, sitting on the side of the bed.
“If you don’t get out of bed in 5 seconds, you lose the privilege of clothing. And we’re going to be spending sometime outside today, so you don’t want that sweetie.” Bette raises an eyebrow, waiting for a reaction.
Tina quickly thinks this through and decides clothing would be the best option. She rolls over and stands up. Her eyes still closed.
Bette smiles at the cute sight, not allowing Tina to see her drop character. “I want you to bath me, dress me and then make me breakfast”
Tina just stands swaying.
“Open your eyes and answer me”
Tina finally squeezes them open. “Yes mam” she smirks. Knowing Bette historically took offense to this term.
“You think you’re clever don’t you”
“Please mam, I don’t know what you mean” Tina says in her most innocent of voices.
If only Tina could have spotted the riding crop that Bette had fetched in preparation, she may have acted differently.
10 minutes later a tender blonde and smug brunette walked down a floor to the bathroom where Tina ran Bette a bath and slowly bathed her. The blonde couldn’t deny that she loved these moments where she could dote on her girlfriend. Once they were both dressed they descended another floor.
“Stop” Bette suddenly said.
Tina looked around.
“I can’t trust you not to escape. So until you prove you’re not going to run you will wear these.”
“I promise I won’t”
Bette leans down clipping ankle restraints to an unimpressed Tina.
Bette looks up. “If you’re good, I’ll remove them” she smiles.
Tina looks down, exhaling. She had planned on running just for the fun of it. Now it would mean she would have to behave until Bette believed she was fully in “submissive captive” mode.
Tina sat as she had dozens of times before and fed her lover. She resisted the urge to smear food on Bette’s face. It would be silly, as she has no chance of running.
Bette is impressed at the obedience, knowing the blonde must be ready to explode. How far could she push her? The thought made Bette grin evilly.
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already the end and I just caught up…very close indeed.Thanks
Thank you for the entertainment Bayley. Loved this story with both it’s naughty and loving elements. Good luck with your next endeavor and we look forward to your next story, whenever that may be. :)
That story was just delicious, and very daring, I must say! I enjoyed it, and also the push and pull of Bette and Tina’s relationship in this story. What so many don’t understand is that the game is absolutely imperative for some. It doesn’t shock or scare when done correctly, and the consensual nature of your story makes that very clear. Tina wants and needs that struggle, and Bette needs to give it to her. It’s the perfect balance, and it has made for a lovely story, along with all of the priceless comedy that has made this journey truly unique. Thank you for posting, and good luck on your project. You’ve been brave to share, and I know I’m not alone when I say that I’m glad you did.
Thank You! Thank You! Thank yo! I’m so happy and so sad all at the same time. Happy you posted but sad you r done for now… Wish you luck on your project and hope to see you back here soon… I along with so many have really enjoyed your story and your out of the box take on B&T…Thanks for sharing and looke forward to reading more when you come back to the world of fanfic xox :)
Thank you for this story, it was really enjoyable and funny to read.
i love this story but why you have to finish? please make a sequel!!!!!!
I’ve thoroughly enjoyed every chapter of this story! You have done a tremendous job of maintaining the balance between Bette and Tina. In each chapter, you made it obvious how much they cared for one another. Although I’m sad to see the words final chapter, I wish you well in all your projects and hope one day you will find the time and desire to once again share your writing with us. Thank you so much!
Please continue writing.This story was so much fun.Thank you and good luck.
That was awesome and love it, thanks for sharing this story with us, hope to see you soon with a new happy B&T, Thanks!
Thank you for this story.
I have to admit, your story had me a little freaked out. After reading it through then going back to reread it, I was looking from the wrong angle. Awesome story Bayley! I hope you don’t wait too long to post another great story. You and GR are what’s been missing from the site :)
Hey Bayley, It has been a true pleasure and joy to read and comment on this brilliant adventure. I do hope that you get the time to felsh out a bachlorette celebration for Bette and Tina as well as their weddign and honeymoon delights. Thank you so much for making me smile everytime I saw a new post from you. Your Loyal Fan.
Great naughty story, one of my fav! Sad that it’s over but hope you’ll post something soon;)) Loved how you made them appear regular to the outside world;))