Fan Fiction
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Lynx
ALICE- me too( smiling)i think almost everything in my purse is back ther.
DANA- hello.
JENNY-hey uhm dana?
DANA- yeah
JENNY-hi this is jenny, shanes friend.
DANA- yeah jenny i know who you are,
ALICE- its jenny, whats wrong, is she ok, does she need us?
DANA- i dont–(alice snatches the phone away from dana while slightly swirving over the lane on the street)
ALICE- jenny sweety are you okay, did you need someone to come over are you alright?
JENNY- no no yeah im fine alice dont worry. I was just wondering if any one has seen shane, she was suppose to pick me up for the dinner. But its okay ill just stay home i have alot of homework to catch up on and all.
ALICE- oh no totally pishaw, we’ll come get you jenny ill be there in like 10 minutes just throw on something sheek and be ready to celebrate . Ok?
JENNY- yeah, ok alright, thanks al.
ALICE- dont mention it.
((as alice hangs up and places her phone in her purse, dana is staring at her with a look of awkwardness))
ALICE-WHAT?
DANA- pishaw?
ALICE- well i got it from, that movie, that one movie with the girl who fought the belly dancer over her drink for…oh whatever its a new thing for me ok.
DANA-yeah.
((scene fades out into jenny geling back her hair and pinning a flower clip in it, when shane and carmen come running in the house with shopping bags))
SHANE- jen hey look what we got the bette and tina.
JENNY- bubble gum champagne bottles and coffee.might i ask why the coffee?
CARMEN- well we figure that the first few months they’ll be up late ya know, so why not have some lattes to keep em going?oh AND we bought outfits for tonight. something new ya know.
SHANE-totally her idea. But look, i got em this.
JENNY- enya?
SHANE- yeah it would totally set the mood for all 3 of em, right?
JENNY- yeah. uhm, can i talk to you for a minute shane?
SHANE(shane sets the bags on the floor) Yeah whats up (they both walk towards the hallway into jennys room)
JENNY- you said you would be there, shane?
SHANE- be where? what–? oh *****. the appointment jenny, im so sorry its been a day i cant even imagine.
JENNY- no , no i mean its ok i can deal with the fact that youve had an interrupted day, but what i cant deal with is how you completely forgot about me , shane. Me. I mean, you know what it doesnt matter.
SHANE- no , jen it matters ok, i fucked up, i admit that i should have been there to support you with this.
JENNY- shane i wont expect much from you i never have. youre a wonderful person. But now you have carmen, and even for you shane. Im sure that just that alone, is more than enough on your plate. But thank you for everything.
((Jenny walks out of the room into the living room and heres a car honking outside))
JENNY- must be alice, see you guys at the planet.
((shane comes walking around the corner just as jenny walks out))
CARMEN- i thought she was going with us?
SHANE- i guess not.Come on go get dressed.
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Carmen doesn’t feel the same way?!Please don’t let it be so:( Carmen love her:) Can’t wait til next chapater!
Humm Shane only said “i love you” to Carmen because she knew already that Carmen is in love with her…remember ? The Real Deal thing ?? Please thats so NOT Carmen. I will be waiting for your next chapter.
Its great. More!
interesting…go on