Fan Fiction
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Lynx
CARMEN- (walks up to the counter and stands with arms crossed)was that what you had to take care of?
((SHANE looks up in surprise. She begins walking towards carmen))
SHANE- carmen, what are you doing?
CARMEN- you mean what am i doing here? i came here because i thought that, maybe. Maybe we could talk about what i said earlier.
SHANE- that you dont love me.
CARMEN- wrong shane. that i dont ‘want’ to love you. But at least you could understand why.
SHANE-no, no i dont understand carmen. i mean just when i decide im gonna go out on a limb and do my best to give you all of me then, thats when you go and put up your defenses.
CARMEN- if you could sit down for one second shane, and see yourself, your actions. Youd understand my fears.
SHANE- well im sorry carmen if you see this monster. But its no suprise to me. I already knew you seen it in me a long time ago.
CARMEN- well you’re wrong shane i dont see a monster. I see you, being on the ground and boxed shut. But im putting my ***** out a limb , and im going to love you anyway. But i refuse to take that next step until you can honestly say, youre ready.
((dana is tip toe-ing around the house looking for her shoe, while alice is applying lip stick in the mirror))
DANA- al! have you seen my shoe, i cant find it and im really off BALANCE( she falls behind the couch)
ALICE- ((alice hurrys over to help dana laughing mockingly))
No sweetie i havent, sorry. Are you okay?
DANA- yeah, great, fine , found my shoe.
ALICE- good cmon we gotta go.
DANA- okay, am i driving or are you driving.
ALICE- i think i should drive, you may still be a little dizzy(laughing on the way out of the door)
DANA- yeah, haha.
((alices cell phone is ringing
ALICE- ***** i hate talking and driving. i made that mistake one time in college, never again. Get it for me please dana.
DANA- ok, alright , wheres your phone?
Alice- should be in my purse, or—
DANA- got it, found it, it was on the floor, heh, wonder how it got back there.
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Carmen doesn’t feel the same way?!Please don’t let it be so:( Carmen love her:) Can’t wait til next chapater!
Humm Shane only said “i love you” to Carmen because she knew already that Carmen is in love with her…remember ? The Real Deal thing ?? Please thats so NOT Carmen. I will be waiting for your next chapter.
Its great. More!
interesting…go on