Fan Fiction
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Lynx
((scene 1 picks up with shane and carmen leaving the hospital from visiting bette and tina and the baby.))
CARMEN- OMG that was so incredible. it never seems to amaze me how beautiful and precious a simple life is, and how they are brought into the world every minute of the day all year long. Isnt that amazing?
SHANE- Definitely. I probably cant even begin to imagine how happy bette and tina are. They finally got what their hearts desired. I guess kind of like me.
((Carmen suddenly stops in the middle of the parking garage.)) CARMEN- So im what you desire?
SHANE- is that so hard to believe?
CARMEN- slightly , yeah it is.
SHANE-how so?
CARMEN-I mean just a few weeks ago you were scared to death to be in the same room with me without thinking that i was trying to pressure you into a relationship. Then you prance around with the two beer twins and make out with random people knowing im in the plain view.i mean what were you trying to proove?
SHANE- NOTHING,but you slept with jenny , so whats your point?
CARMEN- EXCUSE ME? slept, who , i never slept with jenny!
SHANE- uh huh, so, what did you call the kitchen, and you coming over the morning after?
CARMEN- i call it nothing you should care about. Shane you cant just flip a switch and expect everything to come falling into you just because you decide to turn on a heart in that cold bodyyou walk around in.
SHANE- what are you getting at carmen?
CARMEN- Last night, you told me you loved me.
SHANE- yeah CARMEN- Well i dont know if i can say i feel the same way .
((Shane roughly pouts , and walks over to the passenger side of the car and unlocks and opens carmens door. Carmen hops in.Shane carelessly shuts the door and goes in gets in the car.She starts it up and drives away.))
Scene 2—-ALICE AND DANA
DANA- Im gonna make a quick run to the store we’re out of soy milk.
ALICE- ok well can you pick up croutons and pita bread while your out?
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Carmen doesn’t feel the same way?!Please don’t let it be so:( Carmen love her:) Can’t wait til next chapater!
Humm Shane only said “i love you” to Carmen because she knew already that Carmen is in love with her…remember ? The Real Deal thing ?? Please thats so NOT Carmen. I will be waiting for your next chapter.
Its great. More!
interesting…go on