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Making up is never easy! Chapter 23
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“Wow wow wow” Jess said starting to panic “Ben”
“Ben let the kids go they weren’t involved” Amy said
“Ben listen to Amy just let the other kids go and well sort this” Jess panic’d
Ben turned to the boys again and pointed the gun back at them.
Nathan stood at the door refusing to leave.
“Nathan move get out of here” Amy instructed
“Not without you”
“NATHAN MOVE I’LL BE FINE, I PROMISE!” Amy stated
the kids were all out the class apart from the three boys in the corner and Nathan.
“Nathan go please” Amy said softly
Nathan left reluctantly.
“MUM!” Nathan shouted running over to Tina. “He pointed the gun at Amy. She wouldn’t let me stay”
Jacqui, Brian, Alan, Rachael and Bette all came running in.
“Bette Take him” Tina said passing Nathan over
“Please don’t tell me Amy is in there” Bette asked
“Yes and he pointed the gun at her” Nathan stated
“Is Jess in there too?” Alan asked
“Her and Jess are both in there with Ben and 3 other boys” Tina said
Jacqui’s face went as white as chalk as did Alan’s. Brian and Rachael weren’t looking much better.
“Nathan you come with us” Brian said “The rest of the kids are in the gym hall we will take Nathan”
“No chance im staying here till I see my sister” Nathan told him
“Nathan please don’t argue just go” Bette said
“No!”
“Nathan honestly I’ll come get you the minute Amy is out, I promise” Jacqui said
“FINE!” Nathan snapped walking off ahead of them
“Me and Rachael will go to the gym” Brian said “Phone the minute there’s a change”
Back in the classroom
“Ben can I have the gun please?” Amy asked
Ben quickly turned and pointed the gun back at Amy.
“You didn’t help me” He said
“Hunni I didn’t know what was going on…But me and Jess did help you last night remember” Amy said
Ben was processing everything Amy was saying.
Ryan tried to make a run for it!
BANG!!!
Bette, Tina, Jacqui, Alan and Stuart all jumped and looked at the door.
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Sure that was a hell of drama. I hope the boy Ben shot, is fine otherwise that will make Ben situation more complicated. But I trust you to make him coming out clean hey. PPVS
Wow, that was intense. I wonder what Ben’s father is going to do to him? His dad is a prick. Great update. PPS
Wow, kinda heave subject but was written well. Poor Ben, he’s gonna catch hell at home and with all the authorities for defending himself. His parents should be punished for having the gun where he could find it as well. It is understandable why he did this after all those little hellions, beat him up, took his lunch money (extortion), kicked him, etc., one can not blame him for retaliating but not with a gun. I’m sure he felt he was at his rope’s end with no one to back him up or to help him. The school authorities should not come down so hard on him, after all, had they listened to Amy’s concerns when she told them what had been happening and talked to or punished those boys none of this would have happened. The parents of those little hellions should also be talked to very severely for not paying more atention to their boys that caused all this after all, bullies usually start at home as well as doing in their school mates., it doesn’t just happen at school. They also have those tendencies at home and other places as well. Hope they don’t put Ben in juvenile hall for this episode. Everyone was at fault in this matter, the parents, and the school authorities. Very well done. Thanks for posting.
Wow that was scary, glad that Amz and Nate are ok, poor Ben and hope he gonna be ok too. Please post more, thanks!