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Masked Feelings CH 10
Tina – Thanks, Karen. We’ll do what we can for her.
Karen – Go0d luck. It’s going to be a hard road for her….
Dana was the only person who could touch Alice. Even when Karen was bandaging her head, Dana had to hold her. She had an odd calming effect on her, that was until a short time later…
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Lara had drove past Alice’s building, shocked at what she saw. Now turning back around to park in the vacant space in the lot. Dana! What are you doing here? You’re suppose to be in San Diego.
Alice, it was Alice again!
You better keep that mouth shut, Alice. I warned you….. you know I follow through with my threats!
Lara got out of her car and headed up to Alice’s apartment. She rang the doorbell. Tina answered it.
Tina – Lara, what are you doing here?
Lara – I saw Dana’s car. I knew she was at the tournament….. Did something happen?
Tina – Yeah, something happened to Alice. We don’t know what exactly, she won’t talk.
Lara – That’s horrible. Can I see her?
Tina – Just don’t get too close. She won’t let anyone near her, except for Dana.
Should have figured that out. Alice, you are so stupid…. I thought we had an understanding!
Lara walked in with Tina. Dana looked up and saw Lara.
Dana – What are you doing here, Lara?
Did Alice hear her right? Did she hear that name? The name that brought fear. She had to be sure, not wanting to look but needing to. Lara was looking right back at her. The threats coming fresh to Alice’s mind again. The look that came from Lara’s eyes that only she could see.
Alice – NOOOOOooooooo……
Kicking and moving wildly about…. fighting Dana off.
Now backing into the closet, out of Lara’s view.
Confused by the sudden outburst, Dana tries to coax Alice out of the closet. All of Dana’s hard work, put her at square one again. Alice wouldn’t budge and was silent again. She went away…..far, far away.
Lara – What was that about?
TBC
Hope everyone liked the chapter. Please feel free to comment, I like the feedback. You shouldn’t have to wait too long for the next chapter. Please keep reading… the payoff will be worth it, eventually.
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(63 votes, average: 4.21 out of 5)
I wonder how Gina is going to respond to what Lara did to Alice. Thank you for making Lara so evil. Now I have a reason not to like her. And yes, you are killing me, but it’s so good! lol
Hmmm..I enjoy the evil Lara. I just hope Dana can see through her crap. AH, the suspense.lol
damn! poor alice…she really is just a shell of a woman. oooh i can’t wait for dana to put all the pieces together….after that…IT’S ON!! i’m gonna enjoy that hellish chapter. ^ – ^
Better Dana figures out now! Poor Alice, Damn Lara for some I never like you :D
EVIL,just pure EVIL thanks
OK WTF?!..she friggin screamed NOooo like her life depended on it..Tina, Bette,&Nurse Karem R smrt Ladiez..they g2kno that Lara is the sik fuk that did this shit2Alice..4real Lara thnks no1 would b-lieve Alice – well screw that!..her friends will b-lieve her with out a doubt! :) PLZ no mre Pain mang!..Jus get rid of that fuking physcotic sadictic bitch..lock her up..kill her..have her run away frm cops..I dun care how u do it?!..JUS DO IT!!!..Thnx 4this..POST SOON!!.
ahh!! oh man i’m so scared! What is Gina up to in all this? Alice better tell Dana wtf is going on and Dana needs to kick Lara’s ass. Seriously! AH this is such a great story, not like any i’ve read before. I love it! Update soon!
Like ackemat, I’m interested to find out how Gina deals with what Lara has done. Of course, the thing I’m most excited about is Dana finding out :), can we expect some action there?
I was disappointed to realize I missed your last chapter, so I had to hurry to catch up. I couldn’t stop reading. That last chapter blew me away, and this chapter made my heart ache. Poor Alice!That Lara is evil. If Dana doesn’t kill her, I just might. LOL. Like everyone else, I’m curious to see if Gina fit into what Lara did, or if she was left in the dark about it.I’m dying for the next chapter!
Oh man, wow is all i got to say and I cant wait for Dana to find out who put Alice in the state shes in, oooooooh and Gina too. this is getting better and better, thanks for the update!!
that was great but I hope that alice pulls out of this soon and that she makes lara pay for what she did please post soon I love it