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Masked Feelings CH 10
Why is it when someone says not to worry, its all you do? It usually turns out being bad news.
Dana wasn’t finding anything out. At least, she wasn’t in any hospital in the area. She was taking a huge risk with her career and would pay for it later, but Dana needed to leave right now. Alice needed her, she felt it. She planned to keep her promise, not to mess this up. “Alice, where are you, sweetie?
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Tina filled Bette in on Alice being missing. Tina and Bette left the house together to find her. First place to check, her apartment.
Bette – Her car’s there.
Tina – Good, let’s go inside.
Bette would knock and ring the door bell, but no answer.
Bette – She must not be here or is in the shower.
Tina – Let me call her.
Bette – Whatever…
Tina – No answer, just the machine. Bette, I’m worried….
Tina’s cell rang.
Tina – Hello…. Alice?
Dana – No, it’s me. You didn’t find anything out, did you?
Tina – Bette and I are at her apartment. Her car’s here but she must not be at home. Dana got a sick feeling. Her gut was telling her something was seriously wrong.
Dana – Tina, Alice is in trouble, I feel it… Find the Super and make him let you in.
Tina – I sent Bette to find him.
Dana – Good. Please let her be ok…
A few minutes later, the Super was letting them in.
They searched every room. Almost missed seeing her in the bedroom, curled up in the corner next to her dresser, rocking back and forth.
Tina – OH GOD! ALICE, ALICE… speak to me. Are you alright?
Alice was in the void again.
Dana – Tina! What is it? What happened? Is she alright?
Dana wouldn’t hear the answers she so desperately needed to hear. Her phone went dead. “*****!!” No extra battery either. She speeded home. Praying to God that Alice was ok.
Bette and Tina tried to talk to her. All she would do is rock back and forth. Tina tried to touch her. Alice flinched and backed further away, in the corner.
Bette – What should we do?
Tina – I don’t know.
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(63 votes, average: 4.21 out of 5)
I wonder how Gina is going to respond to what Lara did to Alice. Thank you for making Lara so evil. Now I have a reason not to like her. And yes, you are killing me, but it’s so good! lol
Hmmm..I enjoy the evil Lara. I just hope Dana can see through her crap. AH, the suspense.lol
damn! poor alice…she really is just a shell of a woman. oooh i can’t wait for dana to put all the pieces together….after that…IT’S ON!! i’m gonna enjoy that hellish chapter. ^ – ^
Better Dana figures out now! Poor Alice, Damn Lara for some I never like you :D
EVIL,just pure EVIL thanks
OK WTF?!..she friggin screamed NOooo like her life depended on it..Tina, Bette,&Nurse Karem R smrt Ladiez..they g2kno that Lara is the sik fuk that did this shit2Alice..4real Lara thnks no1 would b-lieve Alice – well screw that!..her friends will b-lieve her with out a doubt! :) PLZ no mre Pain mang!..Jus get rid of that fuking physcotic sadictic bitch..lock her up..kill her..have her run away frm cops..I dun care how u do it?!..JUS DO IT!!!..Thnx 4this..POST SOON!!.
ahh!! oh man i’m so scared! What is Gina up to in all this? Alice better tell Dana wtf is going on and Dana needs to kick Lara’s ass. Seriously! AH this is such a great story, not like any i’ve read before. I love it! Update soon!
Like ackemat, I’m interested to find out how Gina deals with what Lara has done. Of course, the thing I’m most excited about is Dana finding out :), can we expect some action there?
I was disappointed to realize I missed your last chapter, so I had to hurry to catch up. I couldn’t stop reading. That last chapter blew me away, and this chapter made my heart ache. Poor Alice!That Lara is evil. If Dana doesn’t kill her, I just might. LOL. Like everyone else, I’m curious to see if Gina fit into what Lara did, or if she was left in the dark about it.I’m dying for the next chapter!
Oh man, wow is all i got to say and I cant wait for Dana to find out who put Alice in the state shes in, oooooooh and Gina too. this is getting better and better, thanks for the update!!
that was great but I hope that alice pulls out of this soon and that she makes lara pay for what she did please post soon I love it