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Masked Feelings CH 10
Bette – We have to do something.
Tina – Don’t you think I know that! Dana’s phone went dead. She would know what to do for her.
Alice heard her name again.
Alice – (barely audible) Dana?
Tina – Did you hear her, Bette?
Bette – Yeah, she said, “Dana.”
Tina – Alice, do you want Dana?
Alice wouldn’t say anything else, just murmuring Dana’s name.
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It felt like it took forever to get there, but she made it. Racing up the stairs, into her apartment, finding them all in Alice’s bedroom. When she saw her….. it broke her heart. It was bad…. as bad as it gets. She wasn’t dead but she may as well be…. Tina tried to hold Dana back and explain Alice’s mental state.
Dana – Tina, Let me go….
Tina – Let’s talk about her first.
Dana – NO…. JUST GO…. I’M TAKING CARE OF HER NOW!
Dana grabs a blanket off the bed and crouchs down to sit next to her. Putting the blanket around her. Alice trying to fight her off….
Dana- Shhhh… it’s going to be ok. It’s Dana…. I’m going to take care of you.
Alice- Dana?
Dana – Yeah, it’s me, sweetie.
Tina and Bette stood back and watched the whole exchange. Dana was so good with her. Maybe she could help her, Alice was so far gone…..
Dana managed to get her arm around Alice. Pulling Alice to herself, cradling her in her arms, holding Alice’s fragile body. Dana started to cry. Wanting to be strong for her but this was killing her.
Dana – What happened to you?
Knowing she wouldn’t get an answer. Stroking the hair out of her face, she noticed the cut on the side of her head. The kind that comes from a hit on the head.
Dana – She needs a doctor. I’d like to get her to the hospital, but I don’t think she’ll go.
Tina – Will a nurse do? I have this friend… maybe she can help.
Dana – Call her…. please.
Tina’s friend, Karen, did the best she could under the circumstances. Patching up her head but unable to examine her at all.
Karen – She really needs a doctor. I did the best I could. Did you call the police? If you haven’t figured it out by now, she’s been assaulted, probably raped. Her behavior shows it. Don’t leave her alone. She needs to feel secure. She might have a concussion. Being that fact, I can’t give her anything to help her sleep. Given her state of mind and that she took a shower, not much evidence if any can be obtained. It’s a good idea to fill out a report, when she able to. I’ll give you the number to a rape counselor, get her to go, if you can.
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(63 votes, average: 4.21 out of 5)
I wonder how Gina is going to respond to what Lara did to Alice. Thank you for making Lara so evil. Now I have a reason not to like her. And yes, you are killing me, but it’s so good! lol
Hmmm..I enjoy the evil Lara. I just hope Dana can see through her crap. AH, the suspense.lol
damn! poor alice…she really is just a shell of a woman. oooh i can’t wait for dana to put all the pieces together….after that…IT’S ON!! i’m gonna enjoy that hellish chapter. ^ – ^
Better Dana figures out now! Poor Alice, Damn Lara for some I never like you :D
EVIL,just pure EVIL thanks
OK WTF?!..she friggin screamed NOooo like her life depended on it..Tina, Bette,&Nurse Karem R smrt Ladiez..they g2kno that Lara is the sik fuk that did this shit2Alice..4real Lara thnks no1 would b-lieve Alice – well screw that!..her friends will b-lieve her with out a doubt! :) PLZ no mre Pain mang!..Jus get rid of that fuking physcotic sadictic bitch..lock her up..kill her..have her run away frm cops..I dun care how u do it?!..JUS DO IT!!!..Thnx 4this..POST SOON!!.
ahh!! oh man i’m so scared! What is Gina up to in all this? Alice better tell Dana wtf is going on and Dana needs to kick Lara’s ass. Seriously! AH this is such a great story, not like any i’ve read before. I love it! Update soon!
Like ackemat, I’m interested to find out how Gina deals with what Lara has done. Of course, the thing I’m most excited about is Dana finding out :), can we expect some action there?
I was disappointed to realize I missed your last chapter, so I had to hurry to catch up. I couldn’t stop reading. That last chapter blew me away, and this chapter made my heart ache. Poor Alice!That Lara is evil. If Dana doesn’t kill her, I just might. LOL. Like everyone else, I’m curious to see if Gina fit into what Lara did, or if she was left in the dark about it.I’m dying for the next chapter!
Oh man, wow is all i got to say and I cant wait for Dana to find out who put Alice in the state shes in, oooooooh and Gina too. this is getting better and better, thanks for the update!!
that was great but I hope that alice pulls out of this soon and that she makes lara pay for what she did please post soon I love it