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Masked Feelings Ch 24 Take control….
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Lara – Get the hell out of our house…. or I’ll remove you myself!!!
Roxy – Now thats hospitality….. do you always treat your guests so nicely.
Lara – What are you talking about? Who the hell are you?
Roxy – (smiling) Aren’t you going to introduce us, Dana? Be a good hostess.
Lara was visibly angry…. looking at Dana for an answer.
Dana – Lara, this is my friend, Roxy. Roxy, this is my wife, Lara.
Roxy – Much better…
Extending her hand to Lara.
Roxy – Nice to meet you, Lara.
Lara reluctantly took her hand….. shaking it.
Lara – Would someone please care to fill me in on what’s going on here?
Roxy – It was nothing….. just Dana being stubborn. I’m sure you know what thats like…. you’re married to her.
Roxy had a way of defusing any situation…. she even got Lara to relax, well a little anyway.
She could tell Lara didn’t like or trust her but she didn’t care. She was sure Lara didn’t like anyone that posed a threat of coming in between her and Dana. Roxy just needed to get to know her and what she witnessed so far, didn’t ease her mind.
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Alice ditched work all together and spent her time cleaning up the mess. Her cell phone rang…
Alice – Hello
Gina – Alice…. where are you? I thought you said you’d be at work.
Alice – I’m busy… cleaning up the mess.
Gina – Mess? What mess?
Alice – Someone trashed my apartment.
Gina – What?
Alice – I stopped by this morning to get some of my things and it looked like a tornado hit.
Gina – Oh Alice. I’m so sorry. Hang on…. I’ll be right over.
Alice – No, don’t do that. I want to take care of this on my own. I’ll see you tonight. I’ll pick up something for dinner… I’ve got to go, Gina. Someones at the door. Bye.
No one was at the door, she just didn’t want to deal with Gina arguing with her. Alice had to throw so much stuff away. It would be hours later till she finished with the mess. Keeping busy was her only salvation…. but the instant the busy work was done, the pain ate at her. She needed to numb the pain, if only for a little while.
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Hiya…as always great suspense. I waiting for the action…he,he…I do like the all feeling Dana ’cause she’s not doing so in S3. I can’t wait for the next chap. Your AWESome dude…Peace
Lara is such a whore!! Yes i would love to kill her!! I cannot believe how this story totally brings out the homocidal maniac in me. I love Roxy I really hope she starts to help the situation and I think Dana should follow her heart not her twat. She should give Alice the necklace and try to talk to her. Keep writing as much as you torture me i am sure you will please me as well…….yummy
great story keep em commin alice needs to hurry up and find the tape and get dana back x
Another great update! I’m glad that you’re addicted to writing this story because I’m addicted to reading it. I do love Roxy she is great! Poor Dana she is a wreck! I also think that Dana should go to see Alice and attempt to give back the necklace…Can’t wait for the update!
Gret update. I’m glad Roxy was there to give wisdom to Dana. I hope Dana tells Lara off. Tony…..uhhh! I hope Alice doesn’t fall for him. It would be really bad.
Ok, I admit it … you were right about Dana. I still say the poor girl is seriously lacking in the self-control department, but hey … she’s Dana!
hey, very interesting development. really like it… bloody hate lara though :P Please for the love of god let Alice & Dana meet up soonish… it’s killing me!
yeah all the bad does make the good seem better, I do like the all feeling dana its about time she admits she loves alice cause i couldnt tell if she strill did..i cant believe she gave up on her though.
ooh, i just had a thought. dana w/ lara is like the dana that was in the closet. she’s miserable and trapped! brteyes – let her out honey; let her out.
I like this update…Dana is getting more in touch with her real feelings…thanks to Roxy!
I love it and I can’t wait to see what lara does next and what will alice do and will dana have that talk with lara please post soon can’t wait this is great
Are you kidding me? How could I not love you when it’s over? I need you silly! Don’t worry about the email, I hope you got it though. It took me forever to write it. I had a lot to say but I didn’t expect you to sit there and read a novel. lol Great update baby, I think things are starting to turn around. I really hope Tony doesn’t take advantage of Alice, I’d die. I agree with one of the other commenters, it’s nice to see Dana feeling SOMETHING, as she feels so little in S3, or at least that’s all we can assume. Gah, you should’ve written S3. I think it would’ve kept people happy, :) I say you and all the other fabulous writers on this site, ban together and write S4. That would be a season to remember. =P Anyways, I hope to hear from you soon. I can’t wait for the next update. And don’t worry, something tells me you’ll always be able to tug at my heartstrings sweetie. Until next time,
hmmm…what to say…well, good thing roxy was there. thanks to that sleeping pill, lara won’t be gettin any lol. whatever dana’s speech is going to be, it’s going to make lara flip out. dana should give alice that necklace. it could give her back some hope. now what is tony planning to do? ok, a couple of chapters ago you gave me a little bit of action. i admit that i went crazy waiting for more. i’ve calmed down, so you can continue writing at any pace you want. btw, i’m starting to like dana again. she’s slowly coming to her senses. what happened to tina, private eye?