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Masked Feelings CH 84 Holding On… Praying for Strength
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Alice felt so helpless sitting there on the floor with her. She wasn’t good with comforting words when someone was in pain. She could make jokes when her friends were a little blue to cheer them up, but this wasn’t just a normal situation. Her bestfriend and love was falling apart before her very eyes and there wasn’t a damn thing she could do to make it better. Holding her was the only thing that made sense… that felt right. The front of her blouse was soaked in tears, but that didn’t even phase her a bit. Alice’s legs were starting to feel numb because of the way she was sitting. She either needed to re-position her legs or maybe even lay back on the floor.
Dana clung to her as she scooted far enough back so she could lean against the dresser behind her. Her head was now resting on her breasts and her crying jag was at it’s end. Both sat there quietly on the floor. Alice grabbed a tissue off the dresser and handed it to her. Dana turned her head to wipe her eyes and blow her nose, but still had Alice pinned in her position. She put the tissue on the floor and rested her head on her chest. She could hear the steady rhythm of her heart beating. Her breasts were soft under her head, making her not wanting to leave. She felt safe, comfortable….. and an unusual warm feeling was spreading through her body.
How was it possible that she could feel so damned aroused when moments ago she was sad and wanting to be left alone? She didn’t know how she was supposed to feel, but her body was sure as hell giving her signals. The warm feeling that was spreading through her body was now accompanied with a wetness saturating the crotch of her panties. Dana buried her head deeper into the valley of Alice’s breasts. She always smelled so damn wonderful. She was also aware of her hands practically burning a hole through her shirt… the sheer heat of her touch could be felt through the fabric.
Alice could feel the warmth of Dana’s breath through her shirt and it made her want to take her shirt off. She craved to have Dana’s mouth on her breasts…. the feel of her teeth and her tongue teasing her nipples. And of course, let’s not forget the way she would feel the pull of her mouth when her lips were firmly attached. Damn… she wanted her now, but this was soooo not the right time to be feeling this way. She was mad at herself for wanting her own needs met above her bestfriend. Was she being selfish for wanting to be with her before she left?
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Luckily I already had a glass of wine in me when I saw you posted. And then I read your author’s notes and opened another bottle. Here we go… The NC-17? Hot! Work that dildo, Alice! Definitely required two cold showers. And it actually didn’t seem weird. I think sometimes when there is a death, you want to feel alive. Argh! Once again I feel bad for Roxy! Shame on Dana for not saying goodbye to Alice. I hope she had a good reason. Another great chapter, brteyes!
WOW!! Jam packed chapter there!! And omg tht must be the best sex scene i have ever read on this site, it was so real and HOT!! lol. Not only did u show there need for each other and there wanting for some pure good sex but u also showed what love they have for each other tht seems to just keep growing. Well done :)And again with Roxy some reli interesting stuff, didnt expect her to do wat she did watching tht video and i cant help again but feel sorry for her, how much can tht woman withstand!! As for Dana leaving the way she did, i hope it was a good reason cus Alice must be reli confused after the way they seemingly just connected. Another mind blowing fantastic chapter and reli can not wait for ur next one :D. P.S I still havent started my next chapter for my story Im terrible lol. I cud blame ur story as a distraction lol just kiddin. PPS X
Me again lol. Dont worry i will never not be a Danish fan and will never stop reading stories as good as this one. :) Dont worry bout tht. x
Alright … you’re not getting a full comment tonight. That being said, I have two things to say to you. Love Juices! Seriously! And enough with the rats already … it’s just fucking gross!
I’m sorry for saying this but truthfully I have a new favorite when it comes to sex scenarios.I don’t know how you manage to write over 10 pages full of hot and steamy sex but you succeed leaving me all warm and fuzzy:-)) Every time I think you can’t do any better you come upwith a new detail here and a new detail there….et voilà , the effect is clearly to be seen. Thatyou still have a lot of ideas in that lovely head of your’s amazes me. Actually, this really provesto me that you understand a lot of your “profession”. I still believe that you should changeyour “métier” and become a writer. Brteyes, you have a great talent, please take advantage of yourabilities, darlin’. I have faith in you. Well, if you should reconsider and start a new career justlet me know:-))) I have a feeling that you’ve got more hidden qualities. Alright, let’s reviewthis chapter now. Roxy is still a character that polarizes. One moment you want to hug her, the next instant you want to kill her. It’s a bumpy road with her and it reminds me of a rollercoaster. Everyone deserves better, even our imprisoned Roxy. I wonder how long she’s going to stay in that bunker. Althoughreacting phobic to the rats I’m sure she’ll find a way to get used to them and with any luck she’ll vanquish her fears. That would be a victory on her side. I kinda feel sorry for her again. This year won’t be as promising as she’s hoping. Well, maybe I’m also wrong….mostly I am anyway, lol. You mentioned that she hasn’t been through the worst yet. Does it mean she finally gets a body transition and becomes a Rox or a Rex? lol Or does David have a genetically manipulated rat which is bigger than a dog? lolJust don’t torture her too much. I still like her as you know. She’s a good girl in my eyes, even thoughshe’s fighting dirty. As for David: what can I say what I didn’t say before? I like his name, lol. I think,I’ve never mentioned that. Who’s his Goliath by the way? I have the impression that David’s pretty muchbored most of the time. He has nothing to do. Give him a gun and a target:-))) I can see a showdownbetween David and Tony though. Could be quite interesting. Why the hell did Dana leave Alice withouta simple bye? Was she too confused as to what had happened earlier (and I’m referring to that supernaturalsex plot you created….simply P-E-R-F-E-C-T!!)? Or was is just a bit too much for Dana? Women tendto have a dramatic exit, lol. I still hope that Al and Dana can work it out someday. It’s still too soonto trust each other, and they apparently are far from it. The solution is lots of conversations but eventhat seems to be too difficult for them. You can send Dana to me for some time. I wouldn’t mind keepingher entertained, lol. But I think, my woman won’t like that. Ehm, I didn’t say anything, lol. I am sosorry for that Britney Spears slogan last time. If I knew that you don’t like her I probably wouldn’twrite that down, lol. She has a song you’d like though. I won’t tell you the title because it’s too dirty. Maybe next time, lol. Can’t wait for your next installment, darlin’. Your story is a qualitymasterpiece and I’m very grateful that you write it:-))) You’re funnytastic…..
P.S.: That dildo plot is stuck in my head now. Thanks for that, lol.
An excellent storyline. Sorry for not commenting on it earlier. I’ve been a silent reader for a long time and thought now it’s the right time to raise my voice. I’m fond of it and expect more to come. Whoever loves thrillers should be reading Masked Feelings. Great title btw. I highly recommend you, brteyes. PPS!
Sweet Baby Jesus! I think I need a cold shower! I was a few paragraphs in when I had remembered that I had read this chapter when you first posted it, but for whatever reason, didn’t leave you a comment. That was all sorts of hot and I loved it. They just keep taking half a step forward and a marathon backward. As for you being a sick bitch, you should totally take that as a compliment. David is still just as twisted as ever, but I don’t think we’ve seen his worst yet. Roxy, while you know how I feel about rats, I’m still having a hard time finding any sympathy for her. Plenty of people have had plenty of bad breaks and wouldn’t consider pulling half the shit she tries to pull. I’m not a black & white person by any stretch of the imagination, but I’m not finding anything redeeming in her. Off to the next chapter. Trying to catch up.
what the??? im confused:S why would she leave like that? so weird i hope shes okay tho nothing bad..poor alice she must be confused…great chapter i love this story so good!! :)