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Masked Feelings CH 84 Holding On… Praying for Strength
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Dana’s hand went up to her face to wipe away a stray tear and brushed lightly against the fabric that covered her breast. Alice felt a shiver run down her arms and quivered ever so slightly. Her arousal was more than obvious when the nipple grew hard and pressed against it’s barriers. She didn’t know if Dana noticed this, but her head was pointed in that very direction. Alice was praying that she had her eyes closed. She didn’t want her to think that she could be turned on when she was in such a bad way. Alice closed her eyes and tried to wish away the sensations, but there was no end to it. The nipple remained hard and it was aching to be touched again.
Dana’s hand settled on her breast. She sighed when she touched her and though she did her best to not make a noise, Alice moaned softly. Dana turned her head and looked up at her. Alice was looking a little embarassed as she bit her lip. She looked like a little kid that had been caught with their hand in the cookie jar. Dana couldn’t even think straight when she saw her expression… or the way that she was biting her lip. Their eyes locked, and as if there was a magnetic pull…. they both moved in for the kiss.
The kiss was soft, tender, and very sensuous. There was a hunger that was just under the surface that quickly got it’s momentum when Alice’s tongue entered her mouth. Dana’s fingers found the buttons of her shirt and fumbled with them. Alice was a little bit quicker and pulled the shirt right over Dana’s head. Dana gave up after the first couple buttons and just yanked the blouse right over Alice’s head. They sat facing each other and kissed again. Dana unhooked Alice’s bra and let her breasts fall. Her nipples got hard quickly when Dana put her palms on her breasts and ran her thumbs across them.
Alice could feel the goosebumps forming on her skin and the rising heat of her core. She felt the chill of excitement on her skin when Dana touched her. The way that Dana had looked at her moments ago made her realize that she needed her too. Alice had tried to get up so that maybe they could resume this on the bed, but Dana had other ideas. She wrestled her back down to the floor, laying her out and pinning her hands to the sides of her head. There was that look again from her… the one that made Alice want to melt into a pool of goo… just like the one that was forming between her legs. She could feel it threatening to brake the barrier of her panties and trickle down her thighs.
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Luckily I already had a glass of wine in me when I saw you posted. And then I read your author’s notes and opened another bottle. Here we go… The NC-17? Hot! Work that dildo, Alice! Definitely required two cold showers. And it actually didn’t seem weird. I think sometimes when there is a death, you want to feel alive. Argh! Once again I feel bad for Roxy! Shame on Dana for not saying goodbye to Alice. I hope she had a good reason. Another great chapter, brteyes!
WOW!! Jam packed chapter there!! And omg tht must be the best sex scene i have ever read on this site, it was so real and HOT!! lol. Not only did u show there need for each other and there wanting for some pure good sex but u also showed what love they have for each other tht seems to just keep growing. Well done :)And again with Roxy some reli interesting stuff, didnt expect her to do wat she did watching tht video and i cant help again but feel sorry for her, how much can tht woman withstand!! As for Dana leaving the way she did, i hope it was a good reason cus Alice must be reli confused after the way they seemingly just connected. Another mind blowing fantastic chapter and reli can not wait for ur next one :D. P.S I still havent started my next chapter for my story Im terrible lol. I cud blame ur story as a distraction lol just kiddin. PPS X
Me again lol. Dont worry i will never not be a Danish fan and will never stop reading stories as good as this one. :) Dont worry bout tht. x
Alright … you’re not getting a full comment tonight. That being said, I have two things to say to you. Love Juices! Seriously! And enough with the rats already … it’s just fucking gross!
I’m sorry for saying this but truthfully I have a new favorite when it comes to sex scenarios.I don’t know how you manage to write over 10 pages full of hot and steamy sex but you succeed leaving me all warm and fuzzy:-)) Every time I think you can’t do any better you come upwith a new detail here and a new detail there….et voilà , the effect is clearly to be seen. Thatyou still have a lot of ideas in that lovely head of your’s amazes me. Actually, this really provesto me that you understand a lot of your “profession”. I still believe that you should changeyour “métier” and become a writer. Brteyes, you have a great talent, please take advantage of yourabilities, darlin’. I have faith in you. Well, if you should reconsider and start a new career justlet me know:-))) I have a feeling that you’ve got more hidden qualities. Alright, let’s reviewthis chapter now. Roxy is still a character that polarizes. One moment you want to hug her, the next instant you want to kill her. It’s a bumpy road with her and it reminds me of a rollercoaster. Everyone deserves better, even our imprisoned Roxy. I wonder how long she’s going to stay in that bunker. Althoughreacting phobic to the rats I’m sure she’ll find a way to get used to them and with any luck she’ll vanquish her fears. That would be a victory on her side. I kinda feel sorry for her again. This year won’t be as promising as she’s hoping. Well, maybe I’m also wrong….mostly I am anyway, lol. You mentioned that she hasn’t been through the worst yet. Does it mean she finally gets a body transition and becomes a Rox or a Rex? lol Or does David have a genetically manipulated rat which is bigger than a dog? lolJust don’t torture her too much. I still like her as you know. She’s a good girl in my eyes, even thoughshe’s fighting dirty. As for David: what can I say what I didn’t say before? I like his name, lol. I think,I’ve never mentioned that. Who’s his Goliath by the way? I have the impression that David’s pretty muchbored most of the time. He has nothing to do. Give him a gun and a target:-))) I can see a showdownbetween David and Tony though. Could be quite interesting. Why the hell did Dana leave Alice withouta simple bye? Was she too confused as to what had happened earlier (and I’m referring to that supernaturalsex plot you created….simply P-E-R-F-E-C-T!!)? Or was is just a bit too much for Dana? Women tendto have a dramatic exit, lol. I still hope that Al and Dana can work it out someday. It’s still too soonto trust each other, and they apparently are far from it. The solution is lots of conversations but eventhat seems to be too difficult for them. You can send Dana to me for some time. I wouldn’t mind keepingher entertained, lol. But I think, my woman won’t like that. Ehm, I didn’t say anything, lol. I am sosorry for that Britney Spears slogan last time. If I knew that you don’t like her I probably wouldn’twrite that down, lol. She has a song you’d like though. I won’t tell you the title because it’s too dirty. Maybe next time, lol. Can’t wait for your next installment, darlin’. Your story is a qualitymasterpiece and I’m very grateful that you write it:-))) You’re funnytastic…..
P.S.: That dildo plot is stuck in my head now. Thanks for that, lol.
An excellent storyline. Sorry for not commenting on it earlier. I’ve been a silent reader for a long time and thought now it’s the right time to raise my voice. I’m fond of it and expect more to come. Whoever loves thrillers should be reading Masked Feelings. Great title btw. I highly recommend you, brteyes. PPS!
Sweet Baby Jesus! I think I need a cold shower! I was a few paragraphs in when I had remembered that I had read this chapter when you first posted it, but for whatever reason, didn’t leave you a comment. That was all sorts of hot and I loved it. They just keep taking half a step forward and a marathon backward. As for you being a sick bitch, you should totally take that as a compliment. David is still just as twisted as ever, but I don’t think we’ve seen his worst yet. Roxy, while you know how I feel about rats, I’m still having a hard time finding any sympathy for her. Plenty of people have had plenty of bad breaks and wouldn’t consider pulling half the shit she tries to pull. I’m not a black & white person by any stretch of the imagination, but I’m not finding anything redeeming in her. Off to the next chapter. Trying to catch up.
what the??? im confused:S why would she leave like that? so weird i hope shes okay tho nothing bad..poor alice she must be confused…great chapter i love this story so good!! :)