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Masked Feelings CH 84 Holding On… Praying for Strength
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She thought she was getting some where with it. The box was rattling loose… a few more hits and she might get to see the inside. She felt a pull on her hands… the chain was moving.
Roxy – SHIT!
Shit was right.. the chain was being pulled in. She screamed in frustration as the chain drew into it’s housing, pulling her against it and leaving no room for her ankle to move. Her foot was flush with the box. There wasn’t an inch of give to the chain. She was stuck there… literally. Roxy would have to stand there until he came back, even then there was no guarantee that he’d feel sorry for her and let the chain out.
After standing there for several minutes, she finally sat down. Roxy had to be careful how she sat, due to the cuff cutting into her ankle. She sat with her knees directly under her chin. This was hardly a comfortable position and one that she couldn’t stay in for very long. In an instant, the power went out… the room was pitch black.
Roxy – FUCK FUCK FUCK……
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Dana had pulled the comforter from the bed and laid it across their spent bodies. Alice drew Dana in against her chest, wrapping her arms around her body. The steady beat of her heart was comforting and left her feeling at peace. Alice softly stroked her hair with her hand. Dana closed her eyes, not really realizing just how drained she felt. She dozed off for a few minutes. Alice laid there awake, just holding her while she slept. She swore that someone was in the house… or was it the house settling? Whatever it was, it didn’t feel natural. Alice whispered in her ear…..
Alice – Dana…baby, wake up…
Dana – huh?
Alice – I think someone is in the house.
Dana – What?…. I knew it.
Alice – Maybe it’s just the house settling…..
Dana – Come on…. you know all the noises this house makes when it’s settling. You wouldn’t have woken me up if you didn’t think it was nothing.
Alice – Do you think we…..
Just then they both heard Sharon yelling from the vicinity of the living room for Dana. Alice laughs…
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Luckily I already had a glass of wine in me when I saw you posted. And then I read your author’s notes and opened another bottle. Here we go… The NC-17? Hot! Work that dildo, Alice! Definitely required two cold showers. And it actually didn’t seem weird. I think sometimes when there is a death, you want to feel alive. Argh! Once again I feel bad for Roxy! Shame on Dana for not saying goodbye to Alice. I hope she had a good reason. Another great chapter, brteyes!
WOW!! Jam packed chapter there!! And omg tht must be the best sex scene i have ever read on this site, it was so real and HOT!! lol. Not only did u show there need for each other and there wanting for some pure good sex but u also showed what love they have for each other tht seems to just keep growing. Well done :)And again with Roxy some reli interesting stuff, didnt expect her to do wat she did watching tht video and i cant help again but feel sorry for her, how much can tht woman withstand!! As for Dana leaving the way she did, i hope it was a good reason cus Alice must be reli confused after the way they seemingly just connected. Another mind blowing fantastic chapter and reli can not wait for ur next one :D. P.S I still havent started my next chapter for my story Im terrible lol. I cud blame ur story as a distraction lol just kiddin. PPS X
Me again lol. Dont worry i will never not be a Danish fan and will never stop reading stories as good as this one. :) Dont worry bout tht. x
Alright … you’re not getting a full comment tonight. That being said, I have two things to say to you. Love Juices! Seriously! And enough with the rats already … it’s just fucking gross!
I’m sorry for saying this but truthfully I have a new favorite when it comes to sex scenarios.I don’t know how you manage to write over 10 pages full of hot and steamy sex but you succeed leaving me all warm and fuzzy:-)) Every time I think you can’t do any better you come upwith a new detail here and a new detail there….et voilà , the effect is clearly to be seen. Thatyou still have a lot of ideas in that lovely head of your’s amazes me. Actually, this really provesto me that you understand a lot of your “profession”. I still believe that you should changeyour “métier” and become a writer. Brteyes, you have a great talent, please take advantage of yourabilities, darlin’. I have faith in you. Well, if you should reconsider and start a new career justlet me know:-))) I have a feeling that you’ve got more hidden qualities. Alright, let’s reviewthis chapter now. Roxy is still a character that polarizes. One moment you want to hug her, the next instant you want to kill her. It’s a bumpy road with her and it reminds me of a rollercoaster. Everyone deserves better, even our imprisoned Roxy. I wonder how long she’s going to stay in that bunker. Althoughreacting phobic to the rats I’m sure she’ll find a way to get used to them and with any luck she’ll vanquish her fears. That would be a victory on her side. I kinda feel sorry for her again. This year won’t be as promising as she’s hoping. Well, maybe I’m also wrong….mostly I am anyway, lol. You mentioned that she hasn’t been through the worst yet. Does it mean she finally gets a body transition and becomes a Rox or a Rex? lol Or does David have a genetically manipulated rat which is bigger than a dog? lolJust don’t torture her too much. I still like her as you know. She’s a good girl in my eyes, even thoughshe’s fighting dirty. As for David: what can I say what I didn’t say before? I like his name, lol. I think,I’ve never mentioned that. Who’s his Goliath by the way? I have the impression that David’s pretty muchbored most of the time. He has nothing to do. Give him a gun and a target:-))) I can see a showdownbetween David and Tony though. Could be quite interesting. Why the hell did Dana leave Alice withouta simple bye? Was she too confused as to what had happened earlier (and I’m referring to that supernaturalsex plot you created….simply P-E-R-F-E-C-T!!)? Or was is just a bit too much for Dana? Women tendto have a dramatic exit, lol. I still hope that Al and Dana can work it out someday. It’s still too soonto trust each other, and they apparently are far from it. The solution is lots of conversations but eventhat seems to be too difficult for them. You can send Dana to me for some time. I wouldn’t mind keepingher entertained, lol. But I think, my woman won’t like that. Ehm, I didn’t say anything, lol. I am sosorry for that Britney Spears slogan last time. If I knew that you don’t like her I probably wouldn’twrite that down, lol. She has a song you’d like though. I won’t tell you the title because it’s too dirty. Maybe next time, lol. Can’t wait for your next installment, darlin’. Your story is a qualitymasterpiece and I’m very grateful that you write it:-))) You’re funnytastic…..
P.S.: That dildo plot is stuck in my head now. Thanks for that, lol.
An excellent storyline. Sorry for not commenting on it earlier. I’ve been a silent reader for a long time and thought now it’s the right time to raise my voice. I’m fond of it and expect more to come. Whoever loves thrillers should be reading Masked Feelings. Great title btw. I highly recommend you, brteyes. PPS!
Sweet Baby Jesus! I think I need a cold shower! I was a few paragraphs in when I had remembered that I had read this chapter when you first posted it, but for whatever reason, didn’t leave you a comment. That was all sorts of hot and I loved it. They just keep taking half a step forward and a marathon backward. As for you being a sick bitch, you should totally take that as a compliment. David is still just as twisted as ever, but I don’t think we’ve seen his worst yet. Roxy, while you know how I feel about rats, I’m still having a hard time finding any sympathy for her. Plenty of people have had plenty of bad breaks and wouldn’t consider pulling half the shit she tries to pull. I’m not a black & white person by any stretch of the imagination, but I’m not finding anything redeeming in her. Off to the next chapter. Trying to catch up.
what the??? im confused:S why would she leave like that? so weird i hope shes okay tho nothing bad..poor alice she must be confused…great chapter i love this story so good!! :)