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Missing. 3
Missing 3
“How I wish you were here with me now….”
Ch 6
Marco didn’t cry on the plane. He didn’t cry in the cab on the way to Endy Chavez’s home. He didn’t cry at all. He was quiet like a mouse. He ate his lunch played with his ninja turtles played with Endy’s children while we talked. He cried when I came over to say goodbye. He cried in a way that said please mommy don’t go. Please I can’t take it if you leave too. I promised him that I would come back and bring Nay (Shane) with me. Did he believe I would do it? Did he believe that I would leave him as well? Was he leaning at a young age much like Shane did that overall women could not be trusted?
I hope not. I hope that I will find her. I hope that we can get it right and that she is not hurt. Or really that she is not hurt too much by me.…… the conversation with Endy didn’t last long.
“Miss Carmen I don’t know how to help, Shane wasn’t very specific as to where she is….”
“Endy I made a bad decision I just want to talk to her…..I need to know….she needs to know that I made a mistake.”
“You know you did this before to Shane. It’s not the first time.”
That’s great. She makes the same mistake and I have to pay for it. Great….it never ends how I much I hate her.
“Endy….you know that I love Shane. You know that Shane loves me. Please just tell me how I can find her….a phone she has a phone right?”
“Miss Carmen….I don’t think Shane wants to talk to any of us…. Shane is somewhere….very far from here…”
“Endy …..Please just give me something….”
“Well Shane….the last I hear from her she is in….Germany maybe a day ago she calls….it was early in the morning…..yes a race in Germany that is……..what happened Miss Carmen….what happened you don’t trust Shane anymore?”
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(14 votes, average: 3.86 out of 5)
You always leave me holding my breath until the last word of an update!
i’m glad carmen owned up to the fact that she made a mistake, but i also completely understand shane for being hesitant to go back with her. awesome update.
amazing! im glad you didnt go out tonight
That was so freakin’ amazing, I’m loss for words.I’m happy that Shane isn’t giving into Carmen so easily. Shane is right, she did everything for Carmen and Carmen kept doubting her and messing with her.I always love angst between lovers, when they love and lust for eachother but something stops them from being together.
amazing! im glad you didnt go out tonight
I’m doing my happy dance with gritted teeth. Damn this is an interesting turn of events. pps!
This is so freakin good! Carmen finally being the one doing the fighting for Shane. Cant wait for the next update!!
finally after a long vacation i managed to catch up on this amazing story. wow man luv the way ur mind works… i cudv nvr expected the story to turn out this way… keep going.. absolutly brilliant!! damn! ive missed this..
HOT DAMN! (Yeah I said that) Glad she found her so quickly. Shane’s pissed off attitude & low blows were so real. Carmen thought all she had to do was confess true love & she’d get her back…well think again. Luv ’em together but Carmen shouldn’t just expect to waltz in & get her back. Although I do think this separation was good for both of them. When they finally end up back together their insecurities won’t tear them apart. Wonderful!
MORE, PLEASE!!!!!
absolutely love your fics. And I agree, I want more!