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Missing. 3
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“I don’t have time Endy I am sorry….what track or street or….is she ok?”
“I think she has new crew from what she tells me…..”
A new crew. That means Shane is in trouble. She is in danger. She is trying to get herself killed. Fucking fuck, fuck. Damnit Shane…..
“Look Endy, Shane trusts you with her life right?”
“Yes Miss Carmen she does.”
“I need you to watch my son while I go try to get Shane to come home.”
“That will not work Miss Carmen.”
“And why not?”
“Because she has no home to come ……home to. You saw to that. Her words Miss Carmen not mine.”
Well isn’t he the voice of fucking reason.
“Endy please watch my son for me till I come home with Shane. You want me to get Shane right?”
“I just want Shane to be happy.”
“We where happy once.”
It seems like minutes go by while he weighs the pro’s and con’s of me bringing Shane back home. Come on man home is where the heart is…..please make this easier for me. I can’t drag Marco all over the planet looking for her….come on…..
“I know Miss Carmen I know. I will watch the boy. You go get Shane. It will be good for both of you. But Miss Carmen you have to understand some things about Shane. Shane is not balanced. She is….Shane has been picking away at herself for a very long time. And you have to understand that when you are so far away form the things that keep you together…the things that keep you from falling to pieces….well Shane may not be the Shane you know. She may be doing things that she isn’t proud of, hanging with people who she would never be a part of. She may not want to see you or talk to you. That’s even if you find her. Till I got that call I haven’t heard from her in three months….so good luck.”
“She will want to see me. I have to make her understand that I made a mistake.”
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You always leave me holding my breath until the last word of an update!
i’m glad carmen owned up to the fact that she made a mistake, but i also completely understand shane for being hesitant to go back with her. awesome update.
amazing! im glad you didnt go out tonight
That was so freakin’ amazing, I’m loss for words.I’m happy that Shane isn’t giving into Carmen so easily. Shane is right, she did everything for Carmen and Carmen kept doubting her and messing with her.I always love angst between lovers, when they love and lust for eachother but something stops them from being together.
amazing! im glad you didnt go out tonight
I’m doing my happy dance with gritted teeth. Damn this is an interesting turn of events. pps!
This is so freakin good! Carmen finally being the one doing the fighting for Shane. Cant wait for the next update!!
finally after a long vacation i managed to catch up on this amazing story. wow man luv the way ur mind works… i cudv nvr expected the story to turn out this way… keep going.. absolutly brilliant!! damn! ive missed this..
HOT DAMN! (Yeah I said that) Glad she found her so quickly. Shane’s pissed off attitude & low blows were so real. Carmen thought all she had to do was confess true love & she’d get her back…well think again. Luv ’em together but Carmen shouldn’t just expect to waltz in & get her back. Although I do think this separation was good for both of them. When they finally end up back together their insecurities won’t tear them apart. Wonderful!
MORE, PLEASE!!!!!
absolutely love your fics. And I agree, I want more!