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Missing. 5
Missing 5
Ch 10
I did everything, everything I wanted to,
I let them use you for their own ends…
Shane loves it when I let her sleep. She loves it more when I let her sleep curled up under me. I love to watch her sleep. I love to smooth her bad dreams away. I love to kiss her forehead just before I drift off myself. I use to dream a lot of my fragmented memories. Once Shane became my reason to forget, it all stopped. I never tried to understand why. I think for the most part that some things just can’t be fixed. I just hope that Shane and I are not one of them.
My body is so tired. I am on state side time. So I just lie here with Shane clinging to me making it hard for me to breathe.
This room or trailer looks like it belongs to someone else. Maybe that Joni guy Shane’s been hanging with. I look at the room. Video games everywhere, beer bottles, wine bottles, clothes….none of them are Shane’s…..well maybe the beer bottles…I get the feeling that I am being watched and it makes me jump shaking Shane from her sleep.
“Wha…..what’s going on?” Shane mumbles.
“There is someone watching us…from the window…”
“It’s just Hans don’t worry…..shit…..shit ……. shit…” Shane says tearing herself away from me. She grabs her clothes and puts them on faster than I knew she could I get up and do the same. I watch her go out and get yelled at by Hans. Knowing Shane the way I do she doesn’t take well to getting yelled at. She just glares her response and he glares at me and storms off. The door slams when she walks back in. Hand in her hair staring at the ceiling. It was like she forgot I was even here.
“Shane?”
“Hmmm?”
“What was that about?”
“Nothing I just missed qualifying….I am starting last. No big deal…”
“So why do you look so…not here…”
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(15 votes, average: 3.93 out of 5)
You make my day!!!! Very, very good!!!!! I would love to see Shane getting blind, from a head trauma. Just to see how she was going to adjust and how Carmen was going to help her go through it. I love Drama!!!! Obrigado!!! :-)
Damn you and your traumatic drama!!! LOL, I love it. I just hope Shane doesn’t wind up disabled or without her memory…that’s a Pandora’s box waiting to explode. I’m curious to know what comes next and well, this made my day. :D PPS!
Metal bar sticking out of her?! Jesus! That’s gotta hurt, yeah? At least she can still feel her legs, no paralyzation. Shane’s tough as nails. . . no, tougher. I have faith that she’ll pull through. Awesome update, by the way. Fricken incredible.
Yeah! finally caught up – Man what an awesome series of stories…. all so fantastically written. I cannot believe you stopped it there!!! you’d better post more asap. Love it!
NDF!!! You’re mean! cmon now… lol poor shane and poor carmen… loved it. f-awsome!
Awesome.
Aww… poor Shane! Hope she`ll get better soon! I loved this chapter, you`re just an awesome writer! Please keep going girl! ;-)
i think maybe i am a devil. why i love poor and hurt sharmen. but i am still a good girl. i also love a happy ending story. haha.. thanks you for sharing your talent.
GEE-ZUS! Can’t Shane ever escape w/o having a lifelong scar to show for it? Yikes! At least Shane realizes her future is w/ Carmen, lets just hope she lives to have it. Loved it.