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Missing. 5
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“My buddy Joni is missing….there is something going on….I have been too distracted to care….”
“Why don’t we just go then….you don’t owe them anything….right?”
“Carmen…..just because we slept together doesn’t mean…..it doesn’t mean you can tell me what to do…”
Of course not. Why would it be that easy?
“What….”
“Nothing Shane…I didn’t say anything…I wasn’t telling you what to do….I was just….”
Shane ignores what I am saying to her. She is smirking at me…..
“Yeah but that jaw of yours got real tense…’
“Do you remember when we first moved in together?” I say to her changing the subject a bit.
“Carm…”
“Do you remember it or not?”
“Yeah I remember….you played your boogie woogie songs….and I played you love songs….so?”
Sarcasm…..Shane is very sarcastic.
“It was a good time yeah?”
“What’s your point Carmen?”
“We could have it again. I got a real nice house in….”
“Stop…just stop…you want me to come back home? Is that what you are asking me?”
“…..Yes.” I say.
“You are unreal.”
“Why because this is so much better? Another race, another missing friend, more violence, more drinking…..this is better than Marco? Better than me?”
“It’s not that simple.”
“It is that simple Shane…..we love each other….Marco misses you…he needs you….”
“I know he does…I know….but you…you’re asking me to trust you again…I don’t know if I can…”
Well what the hell do you say to that?
“Look Shane….I am not as creative as you are, I am not as deep or hurt….I can’t stare off into space thinking about life and things…I am reactionary….I don’t think things thru…..and truthfully you didn’t put up fight about it either….”
The looks Shane gives me…well let’s just say that she wanted to put her fist through a wall.
“….AAAAAAAhhhhhhh….god! You make me crazy….you don’t ever say what you mean, you don’t ever think anything thru…..I gotta go….I got a race and you…you….…are like cancer….a warning sign!”
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You make my day!!!! Very, very good!!!!! I would love to see Shane getting blind, from a head trauma. Just to see how she was going to adjust and how Carmen was going to help her go through it. I love Drama!!!! Obrigado!!! :-)
Damn you and your traumatic drama!!! LOL, I love it. I just hope Shane doesn’t wind up disabled or without her memory…that’s a Pandora’s box waiting to explode. I’m curious to know what comes next and well, this made my day. :D PPS!
Metal bar sticking out of her?! Jesus! That’s gotta hurt, yeah? At least she can still feel her legs, no paralyzation. Shane’s tough as nails. . . no, tougher. I have faith that she’ll pull through. Awesome update, by the way. Fricken incredible.
Yeah! finally caught up – Man what an awesome series of stories…. all so fantastically written. I cannot believe you stopped it there!!! you’d better post more asap. Love it!
NDF!!! You’re mean! cmon now… lol poor shane and poor carmen… loved it. f-awsome!
Awesome.
Aww… poor Shane! Hope she`ll get better soon! I loved this chapter, you`re just an awesome writer! Please keep going girl! ;-)
i think maybe i am a devil. why i love poor and hurt sharmen. but i am still a good girl. i also love a happy ending story. haha.. thanks you for sharing your talent.
GEE-ZUS! Can’t Shane ever escape w/o having a lifelong scar to show for it? Yikes! At least Shane realizes her future is w/ Carmen, lets just hope she lives to have it. Loved it.