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Killed………. like you guys where supposed to be.
“Shane?”
“…………………… Pop?”
He looks at me funny…He shouldn’t be looking at me at all…..this…..this is a dream….
“Pop…..? Hey kiddo I am not that old.”
Ok seriously what the fuck is going on….dreams are supposed to end when you realize they are dreams…right?
“…………….. I need to take a walk or something. Something yeah…”
“Ok Shane we will have Reeves bring the car around front ok hun?” My mother tells me as she hugs me.
Reeves?
“Yeah ok…..”
It’s the drugs………….. I got into an accident. I wrecked in Germany on the back straight away in Germany. Carmen is here in Germany. The guy from Nightline he says…..
“It’s a practice so common. Patients never waking up from anesthesia used during major surgery. Where do they go? What do they see? We have the answer.”
I look at him and he says what?
I turn the corner and there she is, fist pounding on a vending machine. Like the Beck song her ring it gets caught on the chipped glass. It’s her. I breathe a sigh of relief. Mini skirt, boots, hair wild and long. She snaps her gum a little too loud to get my attention.
The Nightline guy he gives me a look as if to say go for it she’s hot.
“Do you have any change this…..this fucking thing just ate my dollar?” She asks kicking the machine with her motorcycle boot.
“Carmen?”
“How’d you know my name?” She asks curious eyes showing through her tinted glasses.
“Your name is Carmen right?”
Leaning on the vending machine her head against the glass staring at the ceiling. She just exhales a sigh that told me her whole life story.
“Yeah………. Carmen del la pica Morales….say that three times fast.”
I walk over to her. Stand right in front of her. She kinda tenses up waiting for something.
“I would only need to say it once…..” I tell her almost kissing her.
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OOOoooOOOOOo god…. im sorry i havent comment lately but i’ve been busy. but im still loving it still my fav!!!!
Aaww I hope you feel better soon NDF. Damn, this is a crazy twist. Straight out of Shane’s nightmares. Good grief. I hope she doesn’t stay comatose for too long cuz having Shane lose her memory too would be well…I don’t even want to think it :p PPS…and feel better ;)
Where’s that summary line from? Anywho, awesome update. Shane’s dream kind of creeped me out. And Carmen calling Havoc “Billy,” yeah, I think that creeped me out more than her kissing him. I would have been worried that it was a reality, had it not been for the “Nightline” guy. Oh, and sorry you’re feeling under the weather. Just take a couple vitamin C pills and have two or three shots of your drink of choice, then have a nice, looong good night’s sleep, uninterrupted. Works like a charm when I can’t afford to get sick (a girl’s gotta pay the bills and go to school on top of that, right?). Get well, and, again, awesome update.
Hah, interesting. Here’s hoping that Shane gets a revelation through her weeeeird dreams. And she’d better fvckin’ wake up too.
great part. interesting alt. dream she is having. hope she wakes up soon.
I love the twist in this story with Carmen being the one waiting for Shane to wake up. I am glad this is just one fucked up dream and not the real story! Hope you feel better!