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The Nightline guy he gives me the nod. I nod right back. It’s a dream…. I’ll play along. He doesn’t look too convinced.
“So stranger what’s your name?” She smirks at me while then looks at her nails.
“Shane McCutcheon.”
“No way….it doesn’t bother you at all to talk to me?”
“Why should it?” Damn even in an operating room death bed clinging…..she is still so fucking hot to me. My Carmen………………god that is so wrong.
“Well it’s just that our families have an interesting feud going on…isn’t it why you are here…..you got into a fight with my cousin Johnny….Shane right?”
I see my reflection a little in her shades and she is right I have a black eye and some stitches on my right eyebrow. Sure I’ll play along. This outta be fun…buy some time so they can do the surgery and wake up to have a funny story to tell Carm…..The guy from Nightline he just shakes his head. Ignoring him I go back to talking to Carmen. She seems younger…..happier…..different.
“How’s Johnny?” I ask just wanting to keep the dream going.
“Well you broke his ribs….I am sure he had it coming…..you ok?” She runs her fingertip over the stitches….I felt it. It sent a shiver through me.
She is definitely the old Carmen. The look in the eyes….that sweet dark cloud over her. So much different from the red hot rage that burned in her eyes now. Fuck. Now what? I see Havoc as he sneaks behind her. I just react and grab him by his throat making him turn blue. She screams for me to get off of him. I watch her soothe him and kiss him wondering what kind of dream is this?
The guy from Nightline he gives me a look as if to say I told you so.
“Fuck………. Shane…you get back to town after all these years and all you want to do is fight everyone…what the hell?” Havoc says.
“Fuck are you talking about? I hate you I have always hated you…..” I yell at him.
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OOOoooOOOOOo god…. im sorry i havent comment lately but i’ve been busy. but im still loving it still my fav!!!!
Aaww I hope you feel better soon NDF. Damn, this is a crazy twist. Straight out of Shane’s nightmares. Good grief. I hope she doesn’t stay comatose for too long cuz having Shane lose her memory too would be well…I don’t even want to think it :p PPS…and feel better ;)
Where’s that summary line from? Anywho, awesome update. Shane’s dream kind of creeped me out. And Carmen calling Havoc “Billy,” yeah, I think that creeped me out more than her kissing him. I would have been worried that it was a reality, had it not been for the “Nightline” guy. Oh, and sorry you’re feeling under the weather. Just take a couple vitamin C pills and have two or three shots of your drink of choice, then have a nice, looong good night’s sleep, uninterrupted. Works like a charm when I can’t afford to get sick (a girl’s gotta pay the bills and go to school on top of that, right?). Get well, and, again, awesome update.
Hah, interesting. Here’s hoping that Shane gets a revelation through her weeeeird dreams. And she’d better fvckin’ wake up too.
great part. interesting alt. dream she is having. hope she wakes up soon.
I love the twist in this story with Carmen being the one waiting for Shane to wake up. I am glad this is just one fucked up dream and not the real story! Hope you feel better!