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She points to that scar on her chin. I love that thing.
“Yes…”
“I got it right down there……I was racing this guy down this road…god so long ago….anyway we got into a fight right about there….and he cut my arm and my chin…..I won that race…..God I remember that night so well. I was on top of the world…..I just met the old you…..I felt like wires on fire if you could believe it. All my boys alive and well….that was the last normal night me. After that…..everything became less and more. All those rides lined up nice and shiny….yeah I beat Johnny and everything sorta changed after that……I mean everything changed before that night….but those were things I didn’t know yet….you know with Roxy and all…..”
“Proud of yourself?”
“Very…..it was one of the more cooler things I did….and I got rewarded for it nicely from my crew…and the old you…..”
“I see……so she rewarded you huh?”
“Jealous?”
“No, I got you now….so what did she do?”
“I never kiss and tell baby…there is nothing charming about that.”
I move to punch her arm and she grabs me instead and pulls me into a sloppy kiss. The kiss which makes my knees weak.
“You are not that charming.”
“That’s not what you said lat night…Oh god! Oh god! I am gonna come! Shane! Shane! Shane!”
“I did not!”
“Face it Carm…you like to yell and scream and bite and scratch…my little…..”
“……..What? My little what?”
Shane is suddenly very serious and I can’t figure why. Unless…..
“Nothing….I was just gonna call you my little hellcat…”
‘That was her nickname huh?”
“Yeah……I am sorry…”
“Its ok….it doesn’t bother me……you can’t control those feelings…..I get it……I am ok really I am.”
“I won’t do it again.”
“You don’t know that….Hey…look at me…..this body has not changed…we can’t ignore it…..its like trying to not imagine a pink elephant…..you can’t control that…..I am still the physical body….I feel the same…I smell the same…..my voice is the same….but my personality is not the same…You can’t help it if some moment bleeds into another and you call me a hellcat….I kinda like it actually.”
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This is so beautiful. The fact that you put Deftones in there…that song especially is the icing on the cake. I won’t wax, but I love this story. Very intense and well-constructed. The dynamics come through so neatly even when the plot gets messy. LOL. A true work of art IMO 8)
thogut that sharmen fans are calmer than other ship fans. like shane. haha.. hellcat! i can call carmen from now. shane’s “goodbye trip” is like a summary all of your fanfics. actually am i not a huge fan of songs but you made me look for that featurin songs.
god this was soo cool…. it made MY heart thump, thump, haha…. i’m so inlove with them… with the story. this is so awesome. OMG rge hellcat thing was great….i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That last piece was beautiful. That hug, such a simple thing to do, but it means so much to someone like Carmen, who had thought she lived in someone else’s shadow, who had thought she was just a body to Shane, a reminder. But now she’s okay, and Shane’s okay, and they owe that to each other and that insanely intense love they share. That’s fricken awesome. (B-Sides and Rarities. It’s a damn good album. I love the “No Ordinary Love” cover; it sounds so twisted. Kind of reminds me of this story.)
I finally caught up and Im really sad you are going to stop after this. Ive enjoyed all your stories and really, they were the only reason why I kept coming back to read Fan Fics. I just want to say thank you for keeping this couple going and seeing how amazing they are together.
SWEET. I love that Shane took Carmen to see her most memorable places. Carmen finally understands that Shane loves her. Wonderful.