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More Than a Feeling
Im sorry to you too. Shane spoke to Dana. I shouldnt a come on to you like that.
I shouldnt have pushed you.
Its all right. Im sorry I went off on you.
We cool? Shane said, raising her eyebrows, looking at Bette, Tina and Dana. The other three nodded. Shane smiled. Sweet. Then, she turned and left, jetting out of school like a bat out of hell.
Bette, Tina, and Dana just watched Shane go, all completely puzzled by the girl. Okay, Bette said, Im going to have to hear this whole thing from the beginning. As they walked, Bette opened the school entrance doors. Does anyone need a ride home?
Dana shook her head. My moms picking me up.
Tina? Bette asked, looking at the blonde with hope in her eyes.
I can take the bus, its okay.
No, let me drive you. Bette grabbed Tinas hand, flashing her that 1000-watt smile.
Tina returned the smile with one of her own. All right. Then, she slipped her hand from Bettes and walked over to Dana. They hugged, tightly, as if they werent going to see each other for a long while.
Call me tonight, okay? Dana asked.
Definitely. Tina responded, still hugging Dana.
Bette stepped to her car, one of three cars left in the lot, and let Tina and Dana share a private moment. When the girls finally parted, Dana waved to Bette and turned in the opposite direction, jogging off to the street corner, waiting for her mother. Tina walked over to Bette, squinting in the afternoon sun.
Tina whistled. Nice car.
Oh, this old thang? Bette joked, opening the passenger door for Tina. Tina got in and Bette closed the door, and then jogged over to her side and got in. So, you want the top up or down?
Ooh, does the top go down? Tina asked with a child-like excitement.
Bette nodded, pushing the button. She watched Tina smile as the top disconnected with the windshield and fold itself in the back, Tinas gaze following it throughout its journey.
Without thinking about it, Tina said, Wait, are you just trying to impress me with your big, fancy car?
Following suit, Bette raised and eyebrow and smiled. What if I am?
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(48 votes, average: 3.71 out of 5)
thanks for this. post more soon please, come friday night quick :D
Honestly, I’d be like Tina and be pretty clueless. No lie, a girl would have to practically hit me over the head with a hammer for me to realize she’s into me. Anyway this group thing might work. Bette and Tina could go off a bit and do their own thing if they want.
interesting indeed cant wait
Nice story! Very curious what friday night will bring. :D
This story is so good. Can’t wait to see what’s next!
Awww… They are so cute and young! lol.. Bring it on! Love it
Holy cow Tomorrow is Friday. I sure hope that the girls get together and enjoy the night. Maybe Tina will realize that it is Bette that she really wants to be with.
Bring on friday night!! love it, plz continue, i need another dose of a great story.
I am so addicted to this story. Here’s an example of how hurting I am -Yesterday I found myself just staring at the screen on my laptop because I had anticipated you posting. It was as though I thought that if I stared at the screen on my laptop long enough I could will a chapter of More Than a Feeling into existance…as you know, it didn’t happen. However, this chapter shows me that the wait wasn’t in vain. Fan-fucking-tastic! Please post soon. Memo to Tina: As Martha Stewart says, “It’s a good thing!” Memo to Bette: Turn on the charm so that Tina comes aboard the S.S. Bette.
Indeed, bring on friday night! Can’t wait to see what’s going to happen, just some B&T loving would be great ;), Post soon please!
OMG this is Exciting!..the chapterz jus keep gettin bedda&bedda..swt Bring on Friday night! It is SO a date..Lookin4wrd2ur nxt update!! Love the strie! Thnk u4anutha Excellent chap Manda..Please Post soon I hope//Keep up the grt wrk
Please let friday night come fast LOL… Great update.. i love this story!
this is my first time comment but have been reading every chapter. I have to say that I am really enjoying this story.
Hey glad u found time to post a new chapter, can’t wait for friday’s date post soon.
“this is just the product of learning Dana, Bette and Alice are gay. You feel left out.”This made me laugh.
I’ve enjoyed many stories but only few of them got me so addicted and yours is one of them!!! You used to post more often at the beginning!!!! I spent the whole week looking for a new post, it’s ridiculous! i should be paying more attention in my job! lol, keep it up, you’re writing a wonderful story.
oh, i can’t wait for friday night..post sooner though, like tomorrow…can’t wait for B&T to connect more….it’s so exciting
I hope Tina don`t freak out about her feelings cause she is in love with Bette i know that! great post i`ll be waiting for the next post. Do you think that in friday night B&T can have a kiss? please!
Glad everything turn out good and can’t wait to see Friday. Ok post soon please, thanks!
And this is one interesting story – like the girls Friday night is going to be very interesting….I can’t wait :o)) And you gotta love Dana for just saying “Do you know that Bette has a crush on you?†LOL that was so great. Please post soon – I love this.