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    My Captor- Chapter 29

     

    Kit: How is she?

     

    The surgeon shook his head gravely.

     

    Surgeon: Let’s see if she makes it past tonight. If she does, the chances of her surviving gets better by the day. I don’t think that bullet was a normal one you find in hand held automatics. More like something you’d find from a sniper rifle. The bullet is custom made.

     

    Kit: So you’re saying the guy that was smashed by the car didn’t do it?

     

    Surgeon: Most likely not, I took a look at his x-rays too. Pretty big steel door. He was smashed like that. I don’t think he would’ve aimed properly.

     

    Kit: Thank you, doctor. I’ll tell that to the detectives. Could I have that bullet please?

     

    Surgeon: Of course, I’ll tell the nurses to give it to you.

     

    Kit and Alice dragged Jenny and Shane into the same room Carmen was healing in.

     

    Kit: Alice, stay here with them. I’m going to talk to the detectives.

     

    Alice: Dammit, i get to be alone with the crazies.

     

    Kit smiled and went out to find the officers. The nurse had given her the slender bullet. She stopped when she got to Bette.

     

    Bette: Hello Kit.

     

    Kit: Bette.

     

    Bette: I haven’t seen you in a long time.

     

    Kit: Well I’m good. For an AA project I needed to talk to you.

     

    Bette: And you didn’t.

     

    Kit: Well I quit that, but baby sis I’m really sorry for all the crap I put you through, but now I own the Planet and work at some other places.

     

    Bette smiled.

     

    Bette: I know, I’ve been keeping an eye on you.

     

    Kit: Awe.

     

    Kit hugged Bette. The two sisters loved each other deeply even though they fought all the time.

     

    Kit: I didn’t know you knew Shane.

     

    Bette: I didn’t know either.

     

    Kit: Well, then again, she doesn’t talk much.

     

    They both laughed.

     

    Bette: Were you looking for me?

     

    Kit: Yeah, this bullet.

     

    Bette looked at it.

     

    Bette: It’s not from the gun Tom had.

     

    Kit: I know. The doctor said Tom wasn’t in a shape to shoot. Even if he did, he would’ve miss. He wouldn’t be able to aim.

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