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    My Captor- Chapter 29

     

    Bette: Second shooter.

     

    Kit: But who?

     

    Dana: Let me see the bullet.

     

    Both of the sisters were surprised to see Dana there.

     

    Dana: Jaffe.

     

    The silver bullet was custom made to be skinnier than normal bullets. It had elaborate carvings on it.

     

    Dana: You won’t find the gun manufacturer anywhere because it wasn’t mass-produced. It was a custom made costume made gun.

     

    Kit: Wow you know all that from a bullet.

     

    Dana: No, because I made that gun.

     

    Kit: Who has it?

     

    Dana: Jaffe.

     

    Bette: We didn’t catch her.

     

    Dana: She doesn’t need to be close at all to shoot. She was our sniper. Best out of all the guys. You know the garage. I went back to check it out. Cameras everywhere. Just like her work. She knows everything that’s happening wherever she is.

     

    Bette: Why was she aiming for Shane then?

     

    Dana: I don’t know, but she’s never misfired before.

     

    Bette: So you think she made a mistake.

     

    Dana: No. I don’t think she did.

     

    Bette: So she knew Carmen would cover for Shane?

     

    Dana: Possibly, but it’s amazing how good she’s gotten. She silenced her bullet, so the one we heard must’ve been from Tom. Which means she knew when Tom was going to shoot and in that split second she sent out her bullet.

     

    Bette: How the hell did she do that.

     

    Dana: Cameras. All her cameras are heat senor cameras and she’s programmed them to lock onto targets. Each camera had a different target. She’s also great with facial expressions and body language.

     

    Kit: Man, she’s good at everything.

     

    Dana: She had to be. She was leading a pack of demons. We were ranked top team ever since she took over.

     

    Bette: This is enough evidence to arrest her. Let’s go.

     

    Dana: You won’t find her.

     

    Bette: Then what am I supposed to do?

     

    Dana: Wait for her to come to you.

     

    Shane and Jenny woke up sore from being dragged around. They both rushed over to Carmen, but Alice tried to keep them back only to get pushed aside.

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