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My first time…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 15 – THE WAR
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Tina: “there is formation of magnetic fields ten meters (~ 33 feet) ahead”
The youngest girl pointed to a foggy spot in front of them.
Kit: “it is weird; it looks like a water wall”
Bette: “I think it is a wormhole…, T, check the nature and range of the event”
Tina: “definitely a black hole, and… it is more or less big inside…, do we have a rope?”
Kit: “I have one in the car, let me bring it”
Bette: “what are we going to do with the rope T…? oh…, I hope you won’t think going inside”
Tina: “you will hold the other end of the rope”
Bette: “nooo… I won’t let you do it”
Tina: “babe…, we need to know, wormholes are forming everywhere and we have to find out how they show up from apparently nothing, I want to record a holo-video of what I’ll see there, so, I will attach one of those visor-recorders to my forehead”
Kit: “here is the rope…, now what…?
After convincing Bette, the girls tie the rope around Tina’s waist and on her arms and thighs and the blonde walked toward the source of the anomalous magnetic field, disappearing when gone through the apparent and almost transparent ‘water wall’ but still connected to the Porter sisters by telepathy.
Inside the wormhole, as Tina crosses the portal, she realizes that she is in a room; however it is not an ordinary room, but a type of an old lab, maybe an ancient chemistry or biology lab…, perhaps not…, what does she see…? shelves with books, many of them old and with funny covers and golden or silvery titles, there are also shelves with bottles and flasks of beautiful shapes, small metal, and wood boxes; the shelves are located above a worktable where mortars with pestles, jars with colored liquids, open boxes containing dried plants and strange powders, burners and ancient scrolls lie. There are also trunks and a bucket containing scrolls on the ground; on the walls are weird pictures of ancient and mythological animals and a pentagram; on the opposite wall, there are more shelves containing plants and semitransparent liquids where big bugs and body parts are floating. At the center of the room there is a table and a redhead girl is sitting with her eyes closed and her hands out in the air as if she were reciting a prayer; at the center of the table there is a glass container from which green and white vapors are emitted beside a big open book with leather cover; Tina is hidden just at the entrance of the portal and behind a locker. Suddenly a blonde boy enters from behind a curtain and speaks.
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I was happy to get a notification that you posted a chapter, but girl, 46 pages , what a happy surprise.
Sadly i have to wait before i am able to read it.
Just give me a Day or two and i hope to give you a proper comment.
Hi Bibi:
Take your time, and I promise in my next story (continuation of this) the chapters will be shorter and will be posted more frequently
Thanks
P
Good lord, what a fantastic written chapter and beautiful picture !
It was an incredible journey to read the story, i didn’t understand all the scientic, but you managed to pull me through it. You even managed to make me feel sorry for Henry, no one deserves that kind of abuse! It makes me very angry.
And now they are in war and the couple have to say goodbye to each other but they are bonded forever in mind, heart and soul.
I am looking forward to your next story!
Thanks Bibi
I’m glad that you like it, my friend, yes I know there is a lot of technicality and sci-fi, but I wanted to be ‘consistent’, sorry about that.
Respect to Henry, yes it is sad and in real life sometimes it happens, I witnessed a similar case in my life and I was and still am very angry; from my point of view, is like a chain reaction, he is a rapist because he follows a model where he was also raped, it is very sad and I didn’t want to excuse or justify his behavior because we all have free will and we can change or stop at any time; but what I wanted, when I wrote this part, is to emphasize that hate begets hatred, and sometimes abuse breeds abusers and whatever is the cause, it has to be stopped and punished,
Yes, our girls love each other and that bond (I want to believe) is ‘unbreakable’, but let’s test it in the new story and find out what their legacy is.
The picture is really beautiful and as I said, mscully made it and it was very kind of her to let me use it.
Thanks again Bibi for reading patiently this story (this is also ‘my first time’ writing a story, I didn’t even write one in my native language but I’m trying to learn)
I hope I’ll post the new one in few days, see you.
P
Wow! Wow !!!
My God proteamics.!
It was a real roller coaster ride.
Finally the enemy declares himself and we have a combat team, it is necessary to join forces and have an elaborate reaction plan even before the invasion occurs, now
Is “War on the Aliens”! And this mission will not be easy because
This team commanded by Bette will fight hand-to-hand with these beings of another dimension to be able to destroy the portals. I am very anxious !
And I imagine that the arrival of these aliens on the planet was because the Earth scientists themselves were transmitting signals to space, both crooked and right, and the aliens detected these transmissions, and with that they arrived at the
Planet through the portals … sorry I’m in my daydream … I think it’s due
The remedies I’m taking to stick the bones off my toes … lol.
And I believe that the reason for this invasion is because of the Earth’s resources that are valuable to these beings of another dimension, and humans are a major drag on their path.
It was very sad to have to separate our couple, but the separated ones are stronger.
All universe
Bear hug.
I’m waiting for the next chapter.
Note: I want to thank you for using one of my photos in your story, this is
an honor .
Hey my friend:
Thanks for reading and commenting, I know SciFi is not something everybody likes, but there is always a ‘public’ who likes this and we all like lesbian’s stories, and this is it. Yes is a roller coaster, so many things together in one chapter, but I needed to finish the story and start the new one that is already posted. To tell the truth, I have another additional story in the oven and it will be ready to post pretty soon, so I needed to end this one. You are not daydreaming, There are resources on our planet and many other places of our universe that are a real temptation for any civilization (do you know there is a celestial body composed of diamond).
Our girls are going to be separated but will work together (far from each other); temptation and other attractive girls are in the way, so, we will test the strength of her love and commitment during the war.
I am very grateful for your picture, I hope you may lend me others for the next story.
Thank so much my friend
Bear hug
P