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My first time…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 6 – THE PLAN
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Bette: “don’t worry, Louise, Tina may be able to break the protection…, how could you know that…, you weren’t on the ship when that happened you were outside…”
Louise: “I didn’t know anything until this expedition; it is a long story that I expect to tell you when I get back if I get back”
Tina was looking at the hologram projection of her mom, to her eyes, and suddenly understood.
Tina: “you dreamt it, didn’t you?”
Louise: “yes…, how do you know?”
Bette: “it is on your face”
Louise: “excuse me… what?”
Bo: “Louise, so many things have happened since you left, some of us have changed… and we can do things that you couldn’t believe”
Bette: “do you have any idea where my mother files are?”
Louise: “I checked in the satellite archives and it asked for a password to access the location, maybe another password is needed to open the files and may be more passwords”
Tina: “no at problem mom I’m your best hacker… oops”
Louise: “are you a hacker Tina”
Bette: “she is the best, how do you think we reach you by hphone?”
Louise: “… okay… we will talk later about that”
At that moment a thunder is heard far away; which means they have been uncovered
Bo: “we have been detected”
Lauren: “for whom?”
Bo: “no idea, but they know”
Bette: “we have to leave you, Louise, we have been traced, and we will contact you as soon as possible, bye”
The signal is fading.
Tina: “bye mom I love you we will bring you back, I promise”
Louise: “bye baby, I love you, bye girls…, Bette, take care of Tina in case you know…”
Bette: “I’ll do, but you will be back here”
The signal shuts down.
Everybody is sobbing, Tina and Bette are holding each other, Bo and Lauren do the same.
New Pasadena, 10:30 a.m. same day–Arroyo Park Cyber observatory border with Old Los Angeles ruins
Professors in charge at this time are Vince Korsak, Danica Palmer, Franklin Phillips, Kathryn Janeway, Angus Partridge additionally are also there Sharon Fairbanks, Phyllis Kroll, and Leonor Pieszecki
First satellite message:
‘EMERGENCY, UNKNOWN MAGNETIC VORTEX FORMING, EMERGENCY’
Angus: (reading the satellite records) “a vortex is forming very fast is wrapping the zone of the vessel, wait another one is developing at the exact site where the ship is”
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No no, you can’t end it with a cliff-hanger! Now i have to wait before i found out of Tina is allright.
Hmm, i knew that Jody, Kelly and Brenda are going to try to break our couple up.
There will be drama, but i have faith in you that you will bring them together at the end of your story!
Thanks for the update!
Hey Bibi28,
Don’t worry too much about Tina, remember Louise dreams ‘we are not alone, they, the dead ones, will be always with us, they will protect us’, now, the challenge is how; besides they young keep changing, and respect to the three ruffians, you are right, there will be drama, I just hope our wonder couple will be strong enough to survive, but there will be surprises too. I will try to update as soon as possible.
Thanks for reading
Enjoyed it. Still don’t like Kelly and Jodi. Thanks
Hi wkm
I don’t like them either, let’s see what will happen.
Thanks for reading.
Our couple does not waste time regretting that things were different in the past, which were yesterday is not today, as it is found in love, everything is an adaptation, for the relationship to work. And there is a question that seems to me is pending, at least that’s what it seemed to me … who will actually be “Alpha”!
And I’ll stay this expectation to know what happened to Tina.
The entire constellation.
“It is not the strongest that survives, nor the most intelligent, but the one that best adapts to change” (Charles Darwin)
Hi mscully
You are totally right, it’s neither the strong nor the most intelligent who survive, but the one that adapts better, and that, my friend, has to be with the ability of subsist and thrive in an environment and the evolutionary process that come along with it. I believe that is also true in the emotional aspect, here both want to be the alpha, but sometimes when things get difficult, to keep going someone have to give and save the relationship, that someone is usually the most mature, Bette had to give, to stop Tina to go away, then Tina surrendered totally; who do you think was the alpha in that moment?
Hi proteonomics !!!!
It is important to know that within a healthy relationship there is no competitiveness, but concessions. If Bette wants to have an Alfa partner, will have to adapt,
since it is the most mature, and give up at some points, even not agreeing, so that their relationship does not become a battlefield.
And Tina showed all his “immaturity” when he finds out who is Bette, getting up to go … considering your needs are greater, their problems are worse and the world is unfair to her … make this discovery one difficulty, which for her would be a serious problem, so she tried to escape … immaturity and emotional stupidity.
Bette was alpha at the time to give, and not let your great love go.
obs: I hope you have understood my opinion, because my English is sometimes a big barrier for me to put everything I try to express, because I am a person who likes to talk, and sometimes language ( English), does not allow me.
Forgive me if I said bullshit.
Bear hug.
hi mscully:
I understand perfectly what you are saying and I agree, they both are growing in their feelings, both are used to be the best of the best, both are alpha but different type of alpha, Bette is more shy type, probably because of her background (dead of her mother and indifferent father) but she is more understanding, she had many one night-stand partners and good relations with probably most of them, like a learning and teaching friendly relationship, and she is loyal (I’m sorry if I’m rough in these characters but I try to portray a situation in a hypothetical society, where many prejudices and maliciousness have been defeated due to the need of human survival, I know it is idealistic and maybe fool) she is very smart; she can understand Tina and each time that she gives up a little is to take more from Tina’s trust, love and will. Tina on the other hand, is another type of alpha, she is bold but not to the point of being blinded, she is more confident and has experience in interpersonal relationships, she doesn’t want to learn from her peers but to teach them she knows that she is lost on her feelings for Bette (she fell for her from the first day as if she was falling in a wormhole with no way out) as she said, she wanted to use Bette for her plans but it backfired and she confessed it to Bette (that confession wasn’t probably on purpose but it was smart, now she is even with Bette’s give up), and the only thing she wants now is to show her girlfriend that she is worthy, she wants to make her proud, in that way she may still be an alpha (or equal) on their relationship, because so far Bette is taken the lead. I put those two as alphas because I like them in a relationship as equals the weakness of one is the strength of the other so they complement and supporting each other.
Again I’m sorry for my english and thank you so much for following this story, each time you guys write a comment it helps me a lot to continue this story
Bear hug too.
happy to know that I’m contributing to this story,
by weaving my comments.
Eager for a new update to continue
this exchange of information.
Bear hug .