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My first time…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 6 – THE PLAN
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Second satellite message:
‘ALERT, NEW VORTEX FORMING AT THR LOYAL POSITIONS, ALERT’.
Vince: “no way… let’s see (reading the satellite outcome)…, I’ve never seen something similar before”
Danica: (checking other instruments) “this is amazing… wait… uh-uh a storm is heading town, an emergency message will come anytime”
Phyllis: “I better send everybody home”
Kathryn: “yes, do it right now”
Third satellite message:
‘MAXIMUM ALERT, FLUX TRANSFER EVENT DETECTED NEARBY LOYAL FORCES, MAXIMUM ALERT’.
Sharon: “are we in the same situation than two weeks ago?”
Danica: “apparently, the only difference is that the entities are outside the ship, hopefully not inside”
Franklin: “check the monitors in the vessel”
Kathryn: “they look fine”
Angus: “there is something here…”
Danica: “what is it?”
Angus: “there are ghost readings of communication between Louise and someone on campus”
Vince: “Sharon may you watch the visor recording in the ship in the las six hours?”
Sharon: “fine I’ll do it”
New Pasadena, 11:00 a.m. same day. New CalTech -SAC
On a bench in the second floor of the SAC, Jody is sited and talking with Kelly.
Jody: “I think we have a good opportunity here of getting even, none of us could have her, well she would never have a relationship, no at least it is with us”
Kelly: “correction Jody, I could have her if I do ignore you when I was 12…, but I had to agree with you that she was so naive and short, now you see she is gorgeous, tall, smart, and the highest rating in bed”
Jody: “nah…, you believe all that everybody says, I don’t think is like that, she doesn’t know how to do relationships”
Kelly: “she knows, what about the rookie blonde, they’ve been together for how long… at least two weeks”
Jody: “that is the reason why we are here, to break them up”
Kelly: “yeah…, hey where is she…? the tits girl, is more than 11:00”
Jody: “Brenda, she may be in her way; she wants the blonde…, well who wouldn’t, and Brenda is beautiful too…, you know, if things don’t work, we could take the tits girl as a consolation prize”
Kelly: “yeah, at least for one-nightstand”
After 10 minutes Brenda is coming from the top of the stairway.
Brenda: “hi guys, could we start?”
Jody: “sure, what took you so long?”
Brenda couldn’t answer, the emergency network starts blinking crazily in every building on campus
All population on campus must look for shelter and remain in the place after this alert is lifted, you have 15 minutes to find you building or remain in the building where you already are. All facilities including dining and recreation rooms at the SAC will be open only for students that are sheltered there. Strong storms are expected to start in the next 20 minutes.
Kelly: “wow I have to go to my building”
Jody: (with malicious look unnoticed by the newbie) “Brenda why don’t you come to my building is closer than yours, and we could talk about this”
Brenda: “good, I’ll go with you”
Kelly gives Jody a questioning look and Jody winks at her with a grin on her face
New Pasadena, 11:00 a.m. same day. New CalTech -building H-027- Bette Porter’s quarters
Bo: “we have to go, Lauren, fortunately, we live next building”
Lauren: “yes, we should go, but I think we will be attacked”
Bo: “yes we must be very careful”
Bette: “it’s fine, Tina and I will try to access my mother’s files”
As Bo and Lauren leave, Bette and Tina start working on the computer and after 10 minutes a lightning hit the building the lightning rod installed there prevents from further damage but the rumble produces a sound wave that shatters some objects among them a mirror in the first floor common bathroom and Dylan a girl that is there is wounded, students are screaming and Bette goes to help, asking Tina to keep working in the password.
Bette and Frank Rizzoli are giving first aids to Dylan, who has minor injuries when a new lightning strike again the building now in the side of Bette’s office, where Tina is working, producing some fumes and flames. Bette runs desperately to her office.
Bette: “Tina…, Tina…”
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No no, you can’t end it with a cliff-hanger! Now i have to wait before i found out of Tina is allright.
Hmm, i knew that Jody, Kelly and Brenda are going to try to break our couple up.
There will be drama, but i have faith in you that you will bring them together at the end of your story!
Thanks for the update!
Hey Bibi28,
Don’t worry too much about Tina, remember Louise dreams ‘we are not alone, they, the dead ones, will be always with us, they will protect us’, now, the challenge is how; besides they young keep changing, and respect to the three ruffians, you are right, there will be drama, I just hope our wonder couple will be strong enough to survive, but there will be surprises too. I will try to update as soon as possible.
Thanks for reading
Enjoyed it. Still don’t like Kelly and Jodi. Thanks
Hi wkm
I don’t like them either, let’s see what will happen.
Thanks for reading.
Our couple does not waste time regretting that things were different in the past, which were yesterday is not today, as it is found in love, everything is an adaptation, for the relationship to work. And there is a question that seems to me is pending, at least that’s what it seemed to me … who will actually be “Alpha”!
And I’ll stay this expectation to know what happened to Tina.
The entire constellation.
“It is not the strongest that survives, nor the most intelligent, but the one that best adapts to change” (Charles Darwin)
Hi mscully
You are totally right, it’s neither the strong nor the most intelligent who survive, but the one that adapts better, and that, my friend, has to be with the ability of subsist and thrive in an environment and the evolutionary process that come along with it. I believe that is also true in the emotional aspect, here both want to be the alpha, but sometimes when things get difficult, to keep going someone have to give and save the relationship, that someone is usually the most mature, Bette had to give, to stop Tina to go away, then Tina surrendered totally; who do you think was the alpha in that moment?
Hi proteonomics !!!!
It is important to know that within a healthy relationship there is no competitiveness, but concessions. If Bette wants to have an Alfa partner, will have to adapt,
since it is the most mature, and give up at some points, even not agreeing, so that their relationship does not become a battlefield.
And Tina showed all his “immaturity” when he finds out who is Bette, getting up to go … considering your needs are greater, their problems are worse and the world is unfair to her … make this discovery one difficulty, which for her would be a serious problem, so she tried to escape … immaturity and emotional stupidity.
Bette was alpha at the time to give, and not let your great love go.
obs: I hope you have understood my opinion, because my English is sometimes a big barrier for me to put everything I try to express, because I am a person who likes to talk, and sometimes language ( English), does not allow me.
Forgive me if I said bullshit.
Bear hug.
hi mscully:
I understand perfectly what you are saying and I agree, they both are growing in their feelings, both are used to be the best of the best, both are alpha but different type of alpha, Bette is more shy type, probably because of her background (dead of her mother and indifferent father) but she is more understanding, she had many one night-stand partners and good relations with probably most of them, like a learning and teaching friendly relationship, and she is loyal (I’m sorry if I’m rough in these characters but I try to portray a situation in a hypothetical society, where many prejudices and maliciousness have been defeated due to the need of human survival, I know it is idealistic and maybe fool) she is very smart; she can understand Tina and each time that she gives up a little is to take more from Tina’s trust, love and will. Tina on the other hand, is another type of alpha, she is bold but not to the point of being blinded, she is more confident and has experience in interpersonal relationships, she doesn’t want to learn from her peers but to teach them she knows that she is lost on her feelings for Bette (she fell for her from the first day as if she was falling in a wormhole with no way out) as she said, she wanted to use Bette for her plans but it backfired and she confessed it to Bette (that confession wasn’t probably on purpose but it was smart, now she is even with Bette’s give up), and the only thing she wants now is to show her girlfriend that she is worthy, she wants to make her proud, in that way she may still be an alpha (or equal) on their relationship, because so far Bette is taken the lead. I put those two as alphas because I like them in a relationship as equals the weakness of one is the strength of the other so they complement and supporting each other.
Again I’m sorry for my english and thank you so much for following this story, each time you guys write a comment it helps me a lot to continue this story
Bear hug too.
happy to know that I’m contributing to this story,
by weaving my comments.
Eager for a new update to continue
this exchange of information.
Bear hug .