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New feelings – Chapter 8
I dont think this is working. Tina said.
Maybe we should get closer? Bette suggested.
Tina arched a brow. How?
Bette separated her legs. You could sit between me legs and Ill put me arms around you.
Tinas breath caught in her throat. Uh huhOkay. Tina was finding it harder to breathe the closer she got. She stationed herself in between Bettes legs feeling strong arms wrap around her.
Tinas dizziness was starting to reappear, and not from claustrophobic anxiety, but from the sensation of Bettes bare skin against her own.
Bettes heart was beating so hard she could hear her own heartbeat. Oh god! I cant believe how close we are. Bette thought. She leaned a little closer smelling the fruity scent of Tinas shampoo. Oh, she smells so good. Her lips were dangerously close to the sun kissed skin of Tinas neck. It took every ounce of Bettes self strength to pull away. She sighed. There are just so many problems with this arrangement. She thought.
She looking at the wall in front of them, and took a deep breath finding the courage to speak. Im sorry Tina
Tina turned her head around looking straight at Bette. Sorry for what Bette? Tina questioned.
Bette let out a deep sigh. She looked up meeting Tinas hazel orbs. Im sorry for everything. Sorry for acting like Ive done, you didnt deserve any of it!
Youre right I didnt, but why? Why were you so angry at me?
Bette frowned. You wouldnt understand. Its too complicated!
Tina searched Bettes deep brown eyes for answers, the only thing she could find was a lost and vulnerable little girl. All Tina wanted was to take the beautiful brunette in her arms and kiss the pain away, never letting go.
How can I feel so strongly for this girl I havent even known for a week? She wondered.
The blonde smiled warmly at Bette. Just talk to me, maybe Ill understand more than you think.
Bette responded with a sigh. She wanted to open up to Tina. There was just something in her beautiful hazel eyes worth trusting, but Bettes walls were still high up, protecting her hearts desires.
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(47 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
I had to post to tell you I love your story. Thanks for posting it!
That was Awesome.
BTW….. I thought the line “Let me assure you” was way HOTTT!!!!
(Keep posting plz)
Damm, made prop to you I would have been comment 32 but for some reason I think it might be sometimes I’m lazy I didn’t comment but that doesn’t mean I don’t read and love this story.
Okay, I just came back to the fanfic page after a leave of abscence… long one! I just read your story from chapter 1 non stop and I freaking LOVE IT!! There is just something really exotic about Bette and Tina being young teenagers and in love.
I need to congratulate you on your pace in the development of this story. We will all be waiting for your next chapter!!
lovin this story. Please let it be Alice on the other side of the door.
ummm just the way i pictured it……but then came back to reality there…..lol .post soon!
oh man! let it be alice! please! :) it will be fun for bette to sneak around jack for a bit of time, come over to see him when he’s gone and they hang out, this story rocks!
Woooo Hooooo! Great update! Thank You Thank You Thank You!!!!!!!
good, now that Bette confessed her true feelings she can stop being a bitch…right? JK, awesome story and i leave all story decisions up to you because you havent gone wrong thus far. LOVE IT!
Ahh this is awesome and damn that is so beautiful and they are so perfect and the kiss is so fucking hot, love it. Post soon, thanks!
You’re such a drama queen. I like the suspense, although I don’t like to wait. I’m looking forward to your next posting.
AHHHHHH!!!!.No you didnt. How you gonna leave us hanging like that. I hope it isnt Jack or one of them other kids, Tina will never live that down. Plz let it be Alice. You know have an obligation to post soon. When ever you leave your audience with a cliffy, you have to post in the next 24 hrs.LOL THATS BULLSHIT. SERIOUSLY THOUGH. PLZ, PLZ,PLZ POST SOON.
I hope it’s like on the show: Bette and Tina sitting side by side when the door opens innocent as angels. They don’t need to be discovered just yet….do they? Maybe they could have the freedom to explore these new feelings and desires before the real world sets in?
im likin this, urm it reminds me of the first time i was honest with my feelings. you really know how to descibe it.
keep going!!!!please ; )
I hope that’s Alice! Maybe if it is her brother he might be cool with it and understand why Bette’s been a bitch to Tina.
I’m very glad they didn’t argue and admitted their feelings for one another.
alright, good job mighty porter! 10 wonderful and bright stars for you my friend…. now, lemme see…. they better catch jack’s jaw fast!!! lol….
“I think I’ve read somewhere that we should sit close to each other….You know for body heat.†Tina suggested. I’ve read that too, somewhere;)Damn, you’re good. There’s always something at the end of the chapter that I can’t wait for onother one:)
OMG ! OMG ! OMG ! OMG ! * fell off the chair*…oh hey awesome chapter by the way. *fell off again*
“Let me assure you.” hahahaha
Great chapter.
Sure i’ll continue reading, and here i am a frustrated reader pulling my hair, asking u to post very soon cuz i hate cliff hangers.. ;)
AWESOME CHAPTER, just as i wanted i to be..
Discovering this new chapter I truly impatiently waited for, I thank you so much for such a delightful morning gift : it couldn’t have been a sweetest way to begin this new week ! I really loved it, you know. Your fine writing makes obvious to me that you must have a true sensitive nature and I thank you also for having pleased my incurably romantic heart this way !
By the way, please never let yourself be influenced by your passionate readers’ suggestions : no doubt you have a very clear view about what you wish to write and more than ever I cannot wait to see what you’ll “cook” for us (… soon, I hope !)!! Thanks again ! ^_^
oooohhhhh man are you a tease or what! Totally lovin this story, looking forward to more posts.
Whoa! that was so wonderful I love it I can’t wait for the next chapter.
Ohhh I hope that it’ll be Bette’s brother, I think he’d be the only one to keep his mouth shut if they wanted him too! Thanks for not bringing out the Bitch monster (aka pissed Bette) out in this chapter, I loved how she just said what she thought! Post soon!
Do I like this? Hell no! I love it! thanx for posting so soon! This was a great chapter! To bad I’m going to Spain for ten days, but keep posting, so that I have something to read in Spain, or when I get back! This is really good!
I like it. It’s much better than my sugguestion. This is getting tooooo good. Hurry and post
Please post soon, i love this story and have been waiting for a new post!
Yummy. Looking forward to the next installment.
K
Wonderful chapter. LOVE it. So glad they finally did something about their feelings. Can’t believe you stopped there lol, don’t stay gone too long.
Dying here how could you leave us hanging like that. Thank you for leting them be nice to each other for now
so many memories come to mind. i love the story. don’t leave us hanging to long. i would really love to know who is at the door.
Wow, just tuning in. Great story, and angle. Hope they are spared much humiliation, and that this doesn’t cause a rift, between the siblings. But, you did warn about drama, in the beginning. So, I’ll trudge through the drama, with everyone else. Please just don’t make them suffer too much.
WONDERFUL CHAPTER..PLEASE DON’T LEAVE US HANGING TO LONG..GREAT JOB..POST SOOOOOOOON…….
WHY???????LOL