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New York Minute – chapter 16
The lights were dimmed and the blinds had all be tipped which gave the room an air of seduction and mystery. Bette was standing looking out of the blinds
“Babe “
Bette turned and smiled
“At last “
Tina nodded – all of last night she had been in control and assured when it had been her making love to Bette. Suddenly she felt butterflies as the inevitability of Bette making love to her came closer. Bette walked across and rested her hands on Tina’s hips
“Did you hit her with something ?”
“Came close “
“I wondered how much it would cost me if I’d asked her to go to her room at 6pm and stay there”
“She’s a little young to be sent to the movies for the evening “
“That crossed my mind as well “
“Sorry “
Bette took several strands of Tina’s hair and ran her fingers through it
“Never “ her voice was lower than usual “ Never apologize for her – she’s just perfect “
“I know – she’s amazing. You know when she was only two she once “ Tina stopped – she could hear herself gabbling. Bette smiled and stroked Tina’s face before leaning in for a long, slow and knee trembling kiss.
“Mind you – her perfection is hardly a surprise given her perfect mommy “
“God Bette “
“I love you Ti – I am going to worship you and your body tonight and for the rest of my time on this earth “
“You rehearsed that “ Tina smiled
“What if I did “ Bette replied smiling “Come on “
Tina hadn’t been as nervous the night before as she was now – knowing it was her “ turn “.
In Bette’s room she had lit the room with candles that danced wild shadows on the walls and made the room feel warm and inviting. Bette stood in front of Tina and with slow movements she removed every item of clothing – no kissing – just a slow striptease. Tina had only seen Bette naked that morning but the sight still left her in a state of reverence. Bette took just as long to strip Tina naked – she allowed herself to wallow in how good it felt. Naked at last Bette pulled Tina close and they both let out sighs as their bodies touched. Bette looked at Tina and taking hold of her by the neck pulled her close so they could kiss passionately. Bette dominated the kiss while her free hand reached Tina’s breast and toyed with the nipple.
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So DAMN HOT!!!! I love it!!! I do hope we get a few more NC-17 from you. Thank you Ally PPS
Okay, someone turn on the air conditioner. lol lol pps
well that was a soaring hot and a sizzling chapter. My computer has gone into melt down I think, no I just realized it is me. So off to have a cold shower :-)Nice job AllyE
Great job AllyE. Bette can finally put a mark in her Complete column. They have come(no pun intended)full circle and can begin to make amends and put their relationship on solid and equal footing. Once they are more solid, hopefully Bette will let Tina tell Angie that Bette is really her other mother. I think Angie will just be overjoyed that she is and that they are now with her permanently. Great chapter. Thanks for posting.
Hope you continue the NC-17 thru the next chapter so that we know has got her groove back. lol BTW, you did a great job with it. Not too much detail, just enough to let our very active imaginations run away with us and thank God no vulgarity. This was about reconnecting, making LOVE tenderly with the woman she loves, wants and needs back in her life. Thanks again AllyE.
HOT! – Ally, you’re allowed to write as many NC17 chapters as you want… I don’t think any of us will complain about it… hehehe
Wow!Wow! Wow! Simply brilliant. Freakin HOT!
I love reading all your storys, thanks for posting.
Amazing as always.Thank you.
I’m first!!!Wow… it was fucking HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;)