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New York Minute – chapter 47
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NEW YORK MINUTE
CHAPTER 47
Bette stared at Tina
“Killed ?”
“Yes “
Bette couldn’t believe what she was hearing
“Your father killed your boyfriend because he wouldn’t do the honourable thing and marry you. Even though you probably didn’t want to marry him or even keep the baby “
“That’s a reasonable summary “ Tina said trying to smile and not really succeeding
“God – what the hell happened – what was he thinking ? did he get caught ? “
Tina had often played this scene in her head – the moment that she admitted the terrible burden that she had been carrying what felt like her whole adult life. She had never wanted to tell Bette and certainly not under these circumstances of having to tell her because she feared that someone else would.
“My parents are very straight laced – moderate republicans and church going and everything “
That didn’t sound like an explanation to Bette – she knew several church going republicans who didn’t go around killing people because they wouldn’t marry their pregnant daughters. Bette didn’t speak – she didn’t trust herself to and she knew that this was a really delicate time. Tina was petrified – she could see it in her eyes and any stupid comment from Bette could really tip things in the wrong way.
“Dad got angry and confronted David – there was a fight . David hit my father – there was a struggle”
Tina started crying again “and the gun went off “
“Whose gun was it ?”
“Dad’s “
“Fuck Tina “
“I know “
“And where is your father now ? I mean – is in him jail ?”
“I don’t know “
There was one question that Bette had to ask Tina
“So what happened today ? something must have triggered this “
“My sister is Angie’s replacement teacher while her usual teacher is off for a few weeks “
“Fuck“
“She hates me – we have never had a close relationship but after David was shot and dad was arrested – she blamed me for everything and she loathes and despises me Bette “
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Wow, really a great chapter! It really fills in blanks about alot of Tina’s issues!
My gosh that was totally unexpected. Bette needs to make sure that Louise will and can not have access to their personal info at the school so that she nor anyone else can find their home. They, on the other hand need to know everything they can about her. What’s the possibility that Louise already knows about them. OMG, has helena had a hand in this? It reeks of her and her machinations. Oh God, I hope not. Fascinating chapter. You are the supreme Drama Queen. Thanks for posting. You would be a fantastic mystery writer, ala Agatha Christie. Love the stories she wrote.
Thanks for posting an update. I love this story! I need more info on this whole N.C. situation though so I hope you post more soon.
Not a whore Tina! Never our Tina! Just young and well…unprotected sex is an uneducated crap shoot! WE NEED TO EDUCATE OUR YOUTH!!!
Well that explains a lot of things that went on in their relationship. Just use the sister and Tina’s past as a way to get Tina’s hist
Con’t-history told and then let her crawl back under her rock and have Tina, Bette and Angie get on with their life. I wonder though if Helena did this too.
Waooooooooo!! that is big. Waoooooo!!!
Poor Tina. What a heavy burden she had to carry all these years! Bette is just marvellous, so supportive and loving.
Shocking update, absolutely loved it.
So that explains things. Thanks for the update, post soon please.
WOnderful update. Great your new computer is working fine. Thank you.
I love your story’s thank you so much for this update! PPS! x
A small light at the end of the tunnel I guess! Having your other stories as indicator, I believe that we didn’t finish with the shocking revelations at this one, are we? Thanks for the post Ally. I hope you can save everything for the old hard drive. Hey kitty, be nice to the person who feeds you please. We want her in a good mood! Kisses
Okay that makes sense – are we waiting for the father now to stop by? One never knows with your amazing ability to twist and turn what seemed quite straightforward. Looking forward to your next post.
Didn’t see that coming. Great update.
I love new computers! Thanks for the update on this one. Still loving it!
I wait a week for this great update …pps
Great update.Thank you.
I’m still shockes at what happened to Tina but I’m quite liking the change in dynamics a little lol. Bette is in shock but at least she’s giving Tina the space she needs as well as consoling her. Was a really deep chapter, but much needed. Pps
You still have the magic touch! Their lives were too idyllic. Need a little drama. MOre L Wing, please. I need to read about Tina groveling especially after she was the cause of Bette’s former lover being killed.