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    Night Returning 3

    Story written on October 25, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    “…the more you taste me….the harder it will be for you…”

    Night Returning 3

     

     

     

    Ch 6

     

     

     

    I never realized the lengths I’d have to go,
    All the darkest corners of a sense I didn’t know.
    Just for one moment, I heard somebody call,
    Looked beyond the day in hand, there’s nothing there at all.

     

     

     

     

     

    With her teeth in the vein of my throat pulling my life from me I feel strange. Strange because of the fact that as the seconds wore on, my line was being erased. Everything I would have become good or bad, right or wrong, happy or sad; those lines are vanishing. It felt good to be in this place. Good in the sense of non existence.

     

     

    She picks me up cuts her wrist and places it on my mouth. That burn of my insides, that hollow dull ache, I could feel the needles of the pain that caused it as the blood did its evil job. I could feel myself get stronger. She yanked her wrist from me when I tried to hold it longer.

     

     

    ‘I took too much from you….this will help you for a little while…..” She whispered, throaty, soft. It echoed in my mind like wind in a metal tunnel.

     

     

     The blood……..It didn’t help. It made everything worse for me. I wanted her so much. It was unreal. It was almost as if I stopped existing as the person I was before I met her. I had that taste of her blood in my mouth, how could I explain it to her. How could I tell her that she was….that she was my end….

     

     

    “You don’t have to say anything….that is what’s great about this….all I have to do is look at you…and I know…”

     

     

     

    “I had this dream about you…..we where making love…..and it was…”

     

     

    “That was my dream not yours….we have a bond…..I was in my resting place, thinking of you…of what it would be like. Carnal pleasure….I don’t remember it the way I should……”

     

     

    “Tell me something….why do you keep draining me…why don’t you just kill me?”

     

     

    “I don’t have an answer to that…..”

     

     

    “I think you want to make me like you….I think your maker won’t like that…and I think…the more you taste me….the harder it will be for you….I am not human anymore and yet I am not like you….there is a part of you in me just like there’s a part of me in you…”

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    1. I just love Carmens character in this story…I’m picturing her the way she was in Supernatural…sooo hot. Agreeing with aisha about getting the whole picture. Waaaaay wonderful update!

    3. So, I’m reading, I’m reading, I’m reading, and I get this weird sense, like I’m being watched. If Carmen knows Shane’s thoughts, and I perceive through Shane’s thoughts and point of view, then Carmen knows the things that I’m thinking too! Like, she’s in my head. (hmm. maybe I need to sleep… like normal people do. normal people sleep.) It’s craaaazy. Anywho, great update (of course), and is the guy from NR2 the late Stan Rice? –wrote poetry, lived on first st. No? Well, that was myyy stab at it. I could be a mile off, but I can’t think of anyone else. :( (Maybe it’s one of the characters in an Anne Rice book from New Orleans, like Louis, but I haven’t read any of the books so I can’t really say. I’ll stick with Stan.) Thanks for the update.

    4. lol i was reading slow this time scared to scroll thinking the story will end. the journey has just begun, thats how i see it. wish i’d lisnd to my friend and read some anne rice. so ill pass dunno who the first st dude is. delicious update btw. *licks lips* lol

    5. tsk tsk tsk… i come and i die.. FANTASTIC!! your descriptions are amazing we get the whole picture in our head. thankyou for reading the comments. the story keeps getting better and better and better and i hope it never ends. i love the way you write. and i love your taste in music. this song suits the chapter very well. new dawn fades!!!… please dont stop writing…

    8. This is fuckin’ awesome!!! I just want more, ASAP!!!! ‘Nough said, Baby, I just want more!!!! Anyways, you’re doin’ a grade fuckin’ ‘A’ job here, keep it up and post soon!!! Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p HoLlA aT mE!!!!

    9. You outdo yourself with every chapter. Absolutely brilliant. P.S. Bum, you don’t sleep either? Twinsies! Do you by any chance work in the medical profession?

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