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Night Returning 3
It’s plain rude of me just in the way I spoke to her. Those drums, those drums making me wet, making me feel….if she would only do it again…make that connection again… those magic fingers, those lips, that drowning sucking spinning feel of her…
“You want to know me…you wanna know how I came to be the way I am?”
“Yeah….’
She strokes my face. Her fingers not warm, not cold. Silky, electric. Her nails, like glittering shards scratch my cheek lightly, just enough to draw blood. I stand fascinated as she licks it. I could feel it, that burning need for it. Her tongue, her teeth, pictures in my head as I look at her. She stokes my head like a pet……
“Tough…..No fear…..except that I will leave…and this will all seem like a very sad dream…………..Ok……….. I was a teacher…back …way back before technology and the internet…and all those other things you mortals use to make your mundane lives end faster….I was married, I had daughter…and a demon came to me one night….with the dismembered heads of my family….You can’t imagine it….your whole life peacefully over…I didn’t even hear it happen. The demon was Guillaume . He was jealous of them….and after he killed them he took me and locked me away…. I came around…came to see that I was trapped in my want of something I couldn’t have. He gave me time, time and space, it did not apply. I was not attached to this world….and I accepted his invite into the void as he liked to call it….”
“Shit….”
“Yeah….shit.”
“Carmen…..why, why go with him if he killed everyone you loved…”
“No…… you are mistaken……I did not love them…..I was in love….with a woman….she had your eyes…the color anyway….My life was forced upon me…..….I …I was upset that they were killed that way…I won’t lie….but at the same time I was free……No more rules… no more…..unhappiness….just the void…no light, no love, no carnal pleasures, no meal consumption, no sunrises….just the void…..”
“Is it a fair trade off….the void…..it seems like a hollow existence…?”
“No, in the darkness you see things….amazing things….but the blood, the life, the thrill of no fear no death….the void it’s all about the void…..”
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(9 votes, average: 4.22 out of 5)
I just love Carmens character in this story…I’m picturing her the way she was in Supernatural…sooo hot. Agreeing with aisha about getting the whole picture. Waaaaay wonderful update!
this story keeps gettin better and better… please continue
So, I’m reading, I’m reading, I’m reading, and I get this weird sense, like I’m being watched. If Carmen knows Shane’s thoughts, and I perceive through Shane’s thoughts and point of view, then Carmen knows the things that I’m thinking too! Like, she’s in my head. (hmm. maybe I need to sleep… like normal people do. normal people sleep.) It’s craaaazy. Anywho, great update (of course), and is the guy from NR2 the late Stan Rice? –wrote poetry, lived on first st. No? Well, that was myyy stab at it. I could be a mile off, but I can’t think of anyone else. :( (Maybe it’s one of the characters in an Anne Rice book from New Orleans, like Louis, but I haven’t read any of the books so I can’t really say. I’ll stick with Stan.) Thanks for the update.
lol i was reading slow this time scared to scroll thinking the story will end. the journey has just begun, thats how i see it. wish i’d lisnd to my friend and read some anne rice. so ill pass dunno who the first st dude is. delicious update btw. *licks lips* lol
tsk tsk tsk… i come and i die.. FANTASTIC!! your descriptions are amazing we get the whole picture in our head. thankyou for reading the comments. the story keeps getting better and better and better and i hope it never ends. i love the way you write. and i love your taste in music. this song suits the chapter very well. new dawn fades!!!… please dont stop writing…
Labelized, thats wut came to my mind wen i first read abt carmen here. she looked SUPER HOT in supernatural.
I am so hooked, this will no doubt bring angst, drama, violence…..Always a pleasure!
This is fuckin’ awesome!!! I just want more, ASAP!!!! ‘Nough said, Baby, I just want more!!!! Anyways, you’re doin’ a grade fuckin’ ‘A’ job here, keep it up and post soon!!! Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p HoLlA aT mE!!!!
You outdo yourself with every chapter. Absolutely brilliant. P.S. Bum, you don’t sleep either? Twinsies! Do you by any chance work in the medical profession?