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    Night Returning 5

    Story written on October 30, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Last Part.

     

    “Please Guillaume …please let’s go leave this place…..”

     

     

    “You won’t do it…We walked the earth for a century…I set you free…and you choose a mortal who wanted death almost as much as we want life….?”

     

     

    “Please Guillaume …I made her….I….. “

     

     

    “….I betrayed everything for you….everything….”

     

     

    “You are right Guillaume …..you are right….you betrayed everything for me…..so I will betray everything for you………”

     

     

    Carmen kissed him then set him on fire. He danced around the room trying to put himself out. Every time he tried she just lit him again and again till he fell into the pyre, ashes and dust it was all that remained when the fire burnt out.

     

     

     

     

    Ch 10

     

     

    I’ve done all I can do

    Can I please come with you?

     

     

     

    Whatever happened between them I never knew the answer. Did it bother me? No. I had other things to worry about. Like how was I going to keep from going insane with boredom? It’s a great big wide world. All I had was time to explore it.

     

     

     

    When I got out of the crypt the sun had just set. I heard Carmen behind me. Felt the presence of the others watching to see how she would handle me.

     

     

     

    “Shane…..”

     

     

    “What?”

     

     

     

    “Nothing I said in there…none of was true….I had to keep my mind….had to make everyone think…that I didn’t want you….”

     

     

     

    “I know…..”

     

     

    “So why are you leaving?”

     

     

    “I had a lot of time to think….and I am not sure I wanted this…I am not sure…all I know is that this is a solitary life….you all could not coexist for whatever reason…..I saw something in you…something that reinforced a thought I have been having. Something you told me…that we don’t love….and we don’t hate…..it was the love part that got me.”

     

     

    “What are you saying….you don’t want to walk with me?”

     

     

    “I am saying that you should have killed me….but I am glad you didn’t……you spent your whole life or unlife I don’t know what you call it….you spent it all with him….I spent most of my adult life crying about a girl….all we have is time in the world…..”

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    3. What a bleak existence for Shane–working just to pass the time, no real interaction with anyone. Bleak. WILL there be a sequel? You mentioned it would be a Halloween story, so, since Halloween is tomorrow, I never thought you’d write a second part. Then again, I think everyone would definitely enjoy this story well after All Hollows Eve. Anywho, it was a great story.

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