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No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Chapter 28
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Alex had heard the giggling from down the hall and he quickly made his way into the room with Alice and Tina.
Alex: And what are you two laughing at?
Alice couldn’t contain her smile, although she did try.
Alice: Nothing.
Alex gave a non-convinced look at Tina.
Alex: Really? Because I know I heard my name and then these burst of hysterical laughter
Tina: No, no no.
Alice: But just out of curiosity, how do you feel about Ricky Martin?
Tina fell back onto the bed yet again.
Alex: What are you talking about?
Alice just smirked.
Alex: Alice, what are you talking about and why is she laughing?
Alice: Here is what I know to be true Alex. Around 3 am last evening or this morning, however you chose to categorize it. I woke up to a strange moaning coming from your side of our room.
Alex’s face turned beet red as he prepared to deny the accusations he knew were coming.
Alice: Upon further investigation I was able to make out the actual words coming from your mouth. ” I will push and pull you down Ricky, living la vida loca”
Alex: Oh that is so not true
Tina: You really aren’t in a position to argue with the reporter.
Alice nodded her head as if to show what a great investigative job she had done.
Alex: That is such a lie.
Alice: Oh no my cute little ***** friend, it is fact.
Alex: You have no proof!
Alice: Oh really?
Alex: Yeah really!
Alice: I’m a reporter Alex. Do you think that I wouldn’t carry a tape recorder with me at all times?
Alex let out a loud gasp.
Tina: You got it on tape?
Alice raised a single eyebrow.
Alex: Oh god…
Bette stood in the doorway for a few moments and watched as Sara tossed and turned slightly in her bed. She had noticed that the young women’s coloring was turning lighter and her lips pale and cracked. Sara’s eyes were barely open at this point. They looked like small slits allowing only small bits of light through.
Bette: May I come in?
Janice looked up from the book she was engrossed in giving Bette a slight nod.
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Why must the good ones always go first? I was expecting this to come up eventually, but wow flair. You did an amazing job. Sarah died the way she lived, and you perfectly portrayed that. Thank you.
Heartbreaking, please post soon
great chapter as always.. thanks!
Have really missed this story so thanks for posting again! that was so very sad and a really lovely gesture on Saras part sending Bette out to get the others knowing it was the end, very sad…so hpoe you can post again soon
I’ve heard it said That people come into our lives for a reasonBringing something we must learnAnd we are ledTo those who lelp us most to growIf we let themAnd we help them in return.
*wiping tear* that was beautifully done. thanks honey
Dear Rachel, even if what I’m crossing made me unable to comment anything for so long, for you I find the strength tonight to do it – ever if I cannot promise I’d be able to do it again.Because tonight I had to express few things, the best I can…I SO deeply agree with whatBetteAndTinaForever wrote : your story is such a gem. But I think you already know for a long time now that you were, you are and no doubt you’ll still be my favorite author here.I was ready to wait as long as it needed to see your name appearing again in the updates list, but you also knew it – don’t you ? Alas, when this so happy day came, my darker journey already began, paralysing all the best in me.I wished so much to express my total gratitude to all these wonderful authors here for the daily gift of their great stories – something that is more than ever an huge support in my life. One of the last.At least I finally bring myself together for a while to express it to you, my so talented queen of drama.BR>Do you have any idea how much your writer’s skins succeed on my mood tonight ? Because you simply made me cry rivers for something else but myself. And that, dear Rachel, is a true and powerful writing’s talent. As well as a life’s lesson.At last, let me also express how much I’m happy for you who finally gloriously succeed in the most essential audition ever, on life’s big stage, winning a shared love. I wish you the most beautiful life on this new “yellow brick road” : be happy, dear talented Rachel. That was what I hoped so much for you and I’m so delighted it happened. I mean it.And, once more, thank you SO much for keeping this masterpiece of yours alive – from the bottom of my so sensitive heart.Thank you, Rachel. A lot.
This is so sad and emotion, I’m crying here. Hope Ashley let Bette help her. Ok post soon please, thanks!
That was so incredibly sad.Flair anytime you post no matter how long between i will always read.I was sad to see Sara go but she’s in a better place.Hopefully Ashley will let Bette help her and vice/versa.
Oh Flair, waiting for your stories are always worth it. And you sure have the touch to not leave a dry eye in the house. Loved it, Sad,but in a way a celebration of how Sara touched them all in her short time with them. DId i mention how much i love this story. ;)
WOW. Truly heartbreaking.
sad!!!!!!!!!!!!! great update nice tie in with wicked have you seen the show
wow flair im a lil choked up!! damn
i think it was perfect, especially the end, and it was beautifully sad, your story is a gift to this website, thanks for sharing it with us as often as you can, can’t wait for what next for B&T…i think this tragedy will make them stronger and closer to each other, because life is short and it’s better to be spent with the people we love…thank you again
Oh my… That was so sad, great chapter as always, can’t wait for the next one, which I hope are coming soon.
That was incredible hard I don’t think I could have written anything as beautiful as you did wow. So sad but yet it was so good to see Bette being there for Sara in her own way. Thanks so much
wow… I don’t think that could be written any better.thanks!
OK, you send me off to work balling like a baby. Wow, that was really great. Sara was so brave in the end. I really love this story-you really deserved the award. Congrats.
I don’t know how much better it could be, I work and deal with this situations frequently and it was extremely well articulated with words. I do enjoy this story, looking forward to the next chapter/s.
hey flair, glad to see another post from you. as sad as it is, I am glad Sara is not in pain anymore. great job, as always.
Powerful. Well done.
wow..so sad..amazing job Flair..powerful..post soon thanks
Tks, but this chapter should have come with a warning, Now off to my day I go, puffy eyes, tear streaked face, looking like someone stole my dog!!! But loved it anyway, tks, and pls post soon….
*sad sigh* That was very sad.. But very beautifully done..
That was sad as hell…thanks for the post.
sad and heart broken..! thx for the post,flair. post soon..!
Sara is such a nice person. Why can’t we hold every good thing in our life? Maybe that’s the real life? We gain and we lose. May Sara rest in peace.
Jesus Flair. . .way to come back! I’ve always loved your writing. . I hope you continue with this story, it’s one of my favorites. Please post again soon! Oh and congrats!
WOW!! If that wasn’t perfect I don’t know what is. That must of been tough to write, but u did it well. Thanks.
Well done. I had a feeling that was what Sara was up to and it was so fitting for her. Can she be my guardian angel too?
Three times…I counted…three times while reading I caught chills and goosebumps running up and down my entire body. That’s a testament to your superb and artful writing, Flair. Perfect. Can we move on to slap happier moments now? Reading your writing is like receiving a gift.
Ok..reading this at work and crying. Not a good thing but it was an absolute beautiful chapter, Flair. thank you and please post when you can.