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    No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Chapter 29

    Story written on December 4, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    “Sure i meant well, well look at well meant did…”

    Bette paused for a moment to wipe her eyes. Even through the blur of tears she could make out a figure standing in the back of the crowd. She blinked twice quickly, her brain doing a double take. It was Sara. It had to be. Bette looked down at the coffin and then back up again. This time she was sure the shock was written all over her face. She watched as Alex stood and made his way to the stranger. It seemed as if they were exchanging pleasantries. She saw him wrap his arms around her and plant a small kiss on her cheek. Slowly he turned to Bette and mouthed the word “Ashley”. Bette could feel her heart gradually calm it’s pace back to normal. Bette’s eyes stayed planted on the young girl. The similarities were remarkable. She watched as Tina offered her hand to Ashley and brought her to the exact spot where Bette stood. Neither was sure just what to do. Did they hug? Shake hands? Curtsey?

    Alice: Ya knowit’s eerie how much you look like your sister.

    Tina and Alex shot their friend a look of disbelief.

    Alice: What? What?

    Alice rolled her eyes and then extended her hand.

    Alice: I’m Alice.

    Ashley’s smile was polite and sweet. Familiar.

    Ashley: Hi Alice. Thank you for the compliment.

    Alice let her gaze travel to each and everyone of her friends.

    Alice: See? It was a compliment.

    Alex seized the moment and took his friends arm.

    Alex: Alice we really should get going. We have to make sure the caterer is at the house.

    Alice waved goodbye quickly before being dragged off.

    Tina: We’re sorry about her. She can be kinda

    Ashley: Oh, no worries. She’s adorable. And honest.

    Tina: Honest to a fault. I’m Tina.

    Ashley: It’s nice to meet you Tina. Even if it is under awful circumstances.

    Tina: OK, well, I’m gonna leave you two for a little while.

    Tina felt Bette squeeze her hand.

    Tina: I’ll be back in a few minutes.

    With that the two women were alone.

    Bette: So, uh we’ve taken care of everything.

    Bette’s hands were shaking in her pockets.

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    12. this is beautiful…but what drama are you talking about? haven’t they had enough of drama? better not split B&T, they belong together…wonderful chapter, wonderful story

    14. Loved Bettes speech at the funeral very sad but very touching….so is Ashley going to be trouble dont get me wrong im sorry for her shes just lost her sister but they can only be alike in so many ways!!! cant wait! just love this!

    15. I hope Ashley feels very welcome in their makeshift family soon. She’s young but very knowledgeable. Not many people can hold their own against Alice! I’m sure she’ll make things interesting. Hehe I see a little bit of Sara in her. :)

    18. albeez..I am here. Just had a conversation with Jwet today…talking about how I missed Flair…and look…here she is! Thanks, Flair. It is wonderful to see you post and get to read this wonderful story

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