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No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Chapter 29
Bette: Your sister left instructions that half of her estate go directly to you. So I’ll be touch about the money
Ashley: She was an amazing person.
Bette: Huh?
Ashley: My sister. She was amazing.
Bette fell silent.
Ashley: And she only associated with people of a very high caliber. You must be one remarkable person Bette Porter. Not only were a part of her life, but she loved you.
Bette: Ashley I am the farthest thing from remarkable
Ashley: She talked about you all the time.
Bette jumped as she felt Ashley’s cold hand reach for hers.
Ashley: She was the only family I had Bette.
Bette let one arm wrap gently around the small frail girl.
Bette: It’s not much of an offer but you have me now too.
Ashley leaned in and placed a sweet kiss on Bette’s cheek.
Ashley: Thank you Bette. That is indeed a huge offer. Now if you don’t mind, I’d like to say a quick goodbye to my sister.
Bette nodded and watched as the tall brunette made her way to her sister’s grave. Bette took a seat and watched as the young girl let tears run down her perfectly chiseled face, every detail the mirror image of Sara’s. Bette smiled as she felt the warm breath on her neck.
Tina: She really does look just like her.
Bette: I know.
Tina: She’s all alone now. I mean, Sara was it for her.
Bette: She’ll have us.
Tina: Bette we need to make sure that we take care of her in any way we can. Sara did so much for us.
Bette: I know T. We will.
Alice found herself sitting right next to Ashley for most of the afternoon.
Alice: So, you’re how old?
Ashley: 17.
Alice: Oh, that’s nice. Good age.
Ashley: Yeah.
Alice: And where do you live?
Ashley: Wherever I can find room.
Alice: So, no apartment?
Ashley: Um, no.
Alice: Oh
Alex: Alice, would you leave the poor kid alone please.
Alice: What? I’m just trying to get to know her.
Ashley intervened.
Ashley: Then talk to me and stop interrogating me.
Alice’s face went white with shock.
Alex: Looks like you don’t need me to defend you.
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Great update. Sad but great. Yeah, Bette do need a bigger appartment lol please post soon
just sad..but they will be fine..i hope Saras sister is a good person and not trouble..im glad to have you back Flair post soon thanks
Interesting twist, Flair. Can’t wait to see how this one develops! As always, love this story and your style.
Great update, look forward to see what the future holds for the girls
I just love this story…..thanks for the updates…..was quite worried for a while!
awesome chapter. but wait, what do you mean the drama is just beginning?? hopefully not b/t drama ._.
So sad, but also so sweet! Really great update! waiting for the next chapter
I can smell the trouble brewing.
excellent flair. so glad your posting again. yep she will need a bigger apartment. thanks.fergz – hurry the foof up your missing a post from flair.
I somehow feel like Ashley’s planning some kind of revenge on Bette and Tina… Will she seduce Bette to part the couple?
Yeah Bette do need a big apartment and I see some drama coming on it way now. Ok post soon please, thanks!
this is beautiful…but what drama are you talking about? haven’t they had enough of drama? better not split B&T, they belong together…wonderful chapter, wonderful story
so is ashley going to be the source of the impending drama? hmmmm, great as always flair.
Loved Bettes speech at the funeral very sad but very touching….so is Ashley going to be trouble dont get me wrong im sorry for her shes just lost her sister but they can only be alike in so many ways!!! cant wait! just love this!
I hope Ashley feels very welcome in their makeshift family soon. She’s young but very knowledgeable. Not many people can hold their own against Alice! I’m sure she’ll make things interesting. Hehe I see a little bit of Sara in her. :)
” Bette: I’m gonna need a bigger apartment…” A bigger apartment with a SOUNDPROOF master bedroom, if I recall their antics correctly…Thanks!
grt update
albeez..I am here. Just had a conversation with Jwet today…talking about how I missed Flair…and look…here she is! Thanks, Flair. It is wonderful to see you post and get to read this wonderful story
Yep, bigger apartment coming, maybe a house. Love how it looks like Alice has met her match, a 17 yr. old seems about right. Thanks for the update.
Sad, sincere and sensational. I really like this story…
sad but great chapter Flair. good to see you back. looking forward to another chapter.
“The drama is just beginning” ?? what are you cooking for them again,hmm? great as always,thanks!