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“Oh Bette, I wouldn’t want to get out, do you hear me? I don’t want to leave you. I’ve been too curious for my own good. But I’ll be good, ok?” Tina gently rocked back and forth. If it was someone’s fault, it should be hers.
Later that day, Bette went to discuss the new arrangement for Jodi with Jorge, who was generous enough to hire another hourly health consult.
“You’re pushing it, Vincent.” He grumbled slowly though, “been sticking your neck out for this Kristen woman, you sure it’s worth it?”
“She’s worth it.” Bette answered with confident.
Jorge creased his brows in surprise. He did not expect to see her acting like this for a woman. “Well, I think she’s a great girl. All I’m saying, is you can’t let anybody interfere with your judgement. And the way you spoke to my wife, was unacceptable.”
“I’m sorry.” The brunette dropped her eyes as a humble gesture. “It won’t happen again.”
Jorge waved her off, knowing Jodi was also out of line.
Then they sat together and talked about business over a bottle of fine whiskey. The man paid an attentive attention to the quality of life, his study embellished with stocks of scotch that only the best money could buy, oil paintings from various auctions, exotic plants, ornaments of china and wax statues of prominent historical figures.
“Respectfully, I don’t reckon it a good idea.” She traced her finger around the rim of the glass, expressing her concerns.
He took a gulp and held the drink in his mouth to savor it. “The police won’t make a move this fast, they gotta regroup. I showed them what we’re capable of. If we don’t take the chance and pay gratitude to our partner, it’ll be very rude of us.” A lit cuban cigar in his hand, he leaned back into the expensive leather chair and breathed out a puff of white smoke. He very contently eyed his new trophies from Mexico, bought by the money found in Eric’s secret little coffer as a reward to himself.
Bette closely studied him through the smoke, and before he turned his head back to her, she glanced at the extravagantly polished room one last time. “Ok, I’ll start preparing.” Her compliance pleased the man.
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Ok I’m getting a hang of this new design. Come and send me friend requests, write on my wall, or leave messages in my box or something!
I think someone may have noticed that I also pulled down all The Lucky One chapters. That’s because I am doing a major revision. There are a lot of changes. It’s half way through already but I don’t know if you want me to post or wait till it’s all done.
I would love your thoughts, if not on the whole story, but on some small things you like or dislike. Any form of comment will be appreciated.
Peace,
Robyn
Yayyy!!!you’re back! I’m so happy to be reading this story again, I thought you were kidding me when you said you were going to post…ahh!!!…miss you my sister! …….ok I’m going to read the chapter now lol
So glad your back with this story. Enjoyed it, thanks
it’s been so long since you’ve post a new chapter,thanks for this long update!
Ok.. Slightly confused.. I don’t remember when they realized they knew each other from high school… Did I miss something, although I am only on page 5 so maybe it will be explained as I read further..
You might have skipped chapter 2 “Why change your name”? It’s when Bette confronted Tina about her appearance at the mansion. They are pretty sure about each other the entire time.
Welcome back! And you came back with incredible force. But i am a little confused, was Tina really having a nightmare where she shot Bette dead or did she it really and is now in some kind of shock where the reality is escaping her?
Would love to read the chapters you already have from The Lucky One.
Hey so glad your back. Awesome chapter. I can’t wait to read more.
Robyn what a comeback!..great to have you back n this sure is one of those “don’t put it down til ya finish reading it” kinda story..my kinda story!..is Bette really dead?..did Tina narc on Bette?…Staying tune for yur next chapter…intriguing!..welcome back missy!.
Roby !! girl where you were? I missed you!
Be very welcome !!
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I have not read the story, I’ll read tomorrow, because I had a day job
12 hours and I’m exhausted and read in this state, your story will not
having due regard to what merece.São 18 chapters, and tomorrow
I will give all my attention to this story.
The complete constellation.
A big bear hug !! …
Really happy to see this story wasn’t forgotten, I’ll be looking forward to the next posts!
First of all, let’s take a deep breath.
Our Roby! This chapter was excellent! and you let me
with a sinking heart, that will be the Bette and Tina destination
amid all this, and when Bette says, “I am dead, but it’s not your fault.”, she made me very afraid.
Please! I precisso a happy ending.
The complete constellation.
Bear hug.
glued to every word, describes me right now….I said it once and say it again…Robyn you are amazing….Very entertaining!