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“Keep this to the ones you trust eh? The house is cleaned doesn’t mean we get to swagger under the coppers’ nose.” He said so, nevertheless put his trust to her, and waved her out of his room.
Meanwhile, Tina gathered the clothes that were thrown across the room since yesterday. She picked up Bette’s trousers and jacket, a small object fell out of the pocket. It was her phone. She hurriedly picked it up and put it on the counter, trying not to think about it. Just for one more day… one more day to be in love and worry free with her long lost lover. However, the damned device stared at her whenever she went. Its silent black screen was loudly accusing her for all the rules she had broken, all the orders she was supposed to comply, all the duties she had failed to exercise. “Fuck! Now there’re a whole bunch of people worrying about me, probably thinking I’m dead.” She remembered the devastation her mother went through when her father was killed. She couldn’t put her through that again. “This is a mistake, for me to be here, how did I end up here?” She clenched the front of her shirt and felt a wave of panic strike her. It was not fair to her, not fair to her mother, and more importantly, it was not to Bette. How could she find love in this god forsaken place and how could love be a mistake?
She approached the thing, and turned it on with shaky hands. There was a single second before it started to vibrate. Clearly the police forces had been waiting for her to come online keenly. The caller’s id was in disguise of her superior, saying “mom”. She pressed the button and answered, as calmly as she could possibly manage. “Hello?”
“Tina!” Exclaimed the other side. “Tina listen to me, you must get out of there immediately! Henry turns out to be a dirty cop, we found evidence in his accounts and tape recorders.” Lieutenant Kroll was blaming herself for sending the officer in. Now Tina was put in a compromised position where she could be sold out easily by a desperate man. What she didn’t know what that Henry had already died.
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Ok I’m getting a hang of this new design. Come and send me friend requests, write on my wall, or leave messages in my box or something!
I think someone may have noticed that I also pulled down all The Lucky One chapters. That’s because I am doing a major revision. There are a lot of changes. It’s half way through already but I don’t know if you want me to post or wait till it’s all done.
I would love your thoughts, if not on the whole story, but on some small things you like or dislike. Any form of comment will be appreciated.
Peace,
Robyn
Yayyy!!!you’re back! I’m so happy to be reading this story again, I thought you were kidding me when you said you were going to post…ahh!!!…miss you my sister! …….ok I’m going to read the chapter now lol
So glad your back with this story. Enjoyed it, thanks
it’s been so long since you’ve post a new chapter,thanks for this long update!
Ok.. Slightly confused.. I don’t remember when they realized they knew each other from high school… Did I miss something, although I am only on page 5 so maybe it will be explained as I read further..
You might have skipped chapter 2 “Why change your name”? It’s when Bette confronted Tina about her appearance at the mansion. They are pretty sure about each other the entire time.
Welcome back! And you came back with incredible force. But i am a little confused, was Tina really having a nightmare where she shot Bette dead or did she it really and is now in some kind of shock where the reality is escaping her?
Would love to read the chapters you already have from The Lucky One.
Hey so glad your back. Awesome chapter. I can’t wait to read more.
Robyn what a comeback!..great to have you back n this sure is one of those “don’t put it down til ya finish reading it” kinda story..my kinda story!..is Bette really dead?..did Tina narc on Bette?…Staying tune for yur next chapter…intriguing!..welcome back missy!.
Roby !! girl where you were? I missed you!
Be very welcome !!
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I have not read the story, I’ll read tomorrow, because I had a day job
12 hours and I’m exhausted and read in this state, your story will not
having due regard to what merece.São 18 chapters, and tomorrow
I will give all my attention to this story.
The complete constellation.
A big bear hug !! …
Really happy to see this story wasn’t forgotten, I’ll be looking forward to the next posts!
First of all, let’s take a deep breath.
Our Roby! This chapter was excellent! and you let me
with a sinking heart, that will be the Bette and Tina destination
amid all this, and when Bette says, “I am dead, but it’s not your fault.”, she made me very afraid.
Please! I precisso a happy ending.
The complete constellation.
Bear hug.
glued to every word, describes me right now….I said it once and say it again…Robyn you are amazing….Very entertaining!