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“Lieut—Henry’s dead. The deal with Iowa drug cartel was a bait, he got exposed and Pulpo shot him.” The memory was still vivid and bloody in her head.
“What?!” The lieutenant drew in a sharp breath and quickly assessed the new situation. “But you have to withdraw from the operation as soon as possible, Tina, there’s no back-up for you. It’s way too dangerous.”
“I can’t.”
“What do you mean you can’t?” Kroll raised her voice. “You leave that place no later than tomorrow, that’s an order.”
“I’m sorry, but I’m involved with someone.” Tina confessed. “The person is very well trusted by Pulpo. I am able to get access to a lot more information through… this person.” She presented the advantage of her involvement with the brunette while purposefully left out the part that Vincent, her “person”, was a woman. It made her dreary, the implication of her dishonesty. “Please, ma’am, I need to stick through this. I’m sorry but I gotta go.” She disconnected the phone and threw it on bed. Staring blankly into the wall, she almost heard the dripping sounds in her chest, her heart shredded and bleeding from the holes. Some minutes later, she heard the familiar footsteps from the hallway so she hid the phone in her suitcase and resumed her cleaning.
When the brunette came back, she seemed to be preoccupied with her own thoughts, and completely missed the blonde’s expression of wary. Tina ventured that the conversation with Jorge had contributed to her lover’s heavy mind. “What’s wrong, babe?” She asked, folding the clothes in her hand and watching Bette in her sofa out of the corner of her eyes.
The term of endearment and the soft inquiry temporarily chased away those frowning lines in between her brows, and brought back a smile to the thin lips. Bette loved how it sounded. She put down the newspaper in her hand and fixed her attention on her lover’s movements. The way Tina sorted her clothes and moved back and forth in her room, was just natural and comforting. It was like they had been together for a long time, and they would be together for even longer, maybe, in her unrealistically optimistic thoughts, forever. But it was not exactly a very hopeful situation, she admitted to herself.
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Ok I’m getting a hang of this new design. Come and send me friend requests, write on my wall, or leave messages in my box or something!
I think someone may have noticed that I also pulled down all The Lucky One chapters. That’s because I am doing a major revision. There are a lot of changes. It’s half way through already but I don’t know if you want me to post or wait till it’s all done.
I would love your thoughts, if not on the whole story, but on some small things you like or dislike. Any form of comment will be appreciated.
Peace,
Robyn
Yayyy!!!you’re back! I’m so happy to be reading this story again, I thought you were kidding me when you said you were going to post…ahh!!!…miss you my sister! …….ok I’m going to read the chapter now lol
So glad your back with this story. Enjoyed it, thanks
it’s been so long since you’ve post a new chapter,thanks for this long update!
Ok.. Slightly confused.. I don’t remember when they realized they knew each other from high school… Did I miss something, although I am only on page 5 so maybe it will be explained as I read further..
You might have skipped chapter 2 “Why change your name”? It’s when Bette confronted Tina about her appearance at the mansion. They are pretty sure about each other the entire time.
Welcome back! And you came back with incredible force. But i am a little confused, was Tina really having a nightmare where she shot Bette dead or did she it really and is now in some kind of shock where the reality is escaping her?
Would love to read the chapters you already have from The Lucky One.
Hey so glad your back. Awesome chapter. I can’t wait to read more.
Robyn what a comeback!..great to have you back n this sure is one of those “don’t put it down til ya finish reading it” kinda story..my kinda story!..is Bette really dead?..did Tina narc on Bette?…Staying tune for yur next chapter…intriguing!..welcome back missy!.
Roby !! girl where you were? I missed you!
Be very welcome !!
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I have not read the story, I’ll read tomorrow, because I had a day job
12 hours and I’m exhausted and read in this state, your story will not
having due regard to what merece.São 18 chapters, and tomorrow
I will give all my attention to this story.
The complete constellation.
A big bear hug !! …
Really happy to see this story wasn’t forgotten, I’ll be looking forward to the next posts!
First of all, let’s take a deep breath.
Our Roby! This chapter was excellent! and you let me
with a sinking heart, that will be the Bette and Tina destination
amid all this, and when Bette says, “I am dead, but it’s not your fault.”, she made me very afraid.
Please! I precisso a happy ending.
The complete constellation.
Bear hug.
glued to every word, describes me right now….I said it once and say it again…Robyn you are amazing….Very entertaining!