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“What do you wanna do?” The blonde asked, evaluating whether there was an angle where she could help Bette, but her hope wasn’t too great for she knew the woman was way too deeply involved.
The brunette shrugged, and fixed her attention to the complicated design of the backyard, drawing a route in her mind. The marble stairs connecting the main building to the hidden gate were broad first, then narrowed down to the width of one automobile, statues and pillars on each side, and the lush, well trimmed plants provided a natural barrier in case of a gun fight. She wanted to argue herself that it was way too exaggerated to come up with an escape route, even if everything went down, the world wouldn’t miss her, but as she thought of the woman that she loved so dearly, the single most precious thing that she cannot lose.
Without hearing a response, Tina came to stand beside Bette at the window. “Bette?”
“Listen,” She took in a deep breath with determination and made a life-altering decision, “there’s a 99 percent chance something is gonna go wrong. I don’t wanna scare you, T, but I can seriously feel it.” She reached out to take the slim hand in hers and squeeze it gently to stress her point. If she ever trusted anything, it would be her instinct. “If there’s any sign that the situation is getting out of control, I need you to leave this place. There’s a concealed door and it leads right to a path on lakeshore.” Quickly, Bette left Tina’s side and fumbled in her safe. When she turned around, she held a pistol in her hand.
Tina soon recognized it as a .25 caliber Colt Vest pocket gun. Bette looked concerned.“Do you know how to shoot? I’ll teach you, don’t worry, it’s not too difficult.”
“Wait, wait Bette,” Feeling overwhelmed, Tina cut her off by tracing her hand on her arm, “we’re not there yet.” She gingerly took the gun from Bette’s hand and placed it safely on the windowsill, making sure it wasn’t point to anyone or anything. For sure she could handle a gun, she even planned to smuggle one in sometime. But having Bette giving her a gun as if it would be of use anytime soon really scared her.
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Ok I’m getting a hang of this new design. Come and send me friend requests, write on my wall, or leave messages in my box or something!
I think someone may have noticed that I also pulled down all The Lucky One chapters. That’s because I am doing a major revision. There are a lot of changes. It’s half way through already but I don’t know if you want me to post or wait till it’s all done.
I would love your thoughts, if not on the whole story, but on some small things you like or dislike. Any form of comment will be appreciated.
Peace,
Robyn
Yayyy!!!you’re back! I’m so happy to be reading this story again, I thought you were kidding me when you said you were going to post…ahh!!!…miss you my sister! …….ok I’m going to read the chapter now lol
So glad your back with this story. Enjoyed it, thanks
it’s been so long since you’ve post a new chapter,thanks for this long update!
Ok.. Slightly confused.. I don’t remember when they realized they knew each other from high school… Did I miss something, although I am only on page 5 so maybe it will be explained as I read further..
You might have skipped chapter 2 “Why change your name”? It’s when Bette confronted Tina about her appearance at the mansion. They are pretty sure about each other the entire time.
Welcome back! And you came back with incredible force. But i am a little confused, was Tina really having a nightmare where she shot Bette dead or did she it really and is now in some kind of shock where the reality is escaping her?
Would love to read the chapters you already have from The Lucky One.
Hey so glad your back. Awesome chapter. I can’t wait to read more.
Robyn what a comeback!..great to have you back n this sure is one of those “don’t put it down til ya finish reading it” kinda story..my kinda story!..is Bette really dead?..did Tina narc on Bette?…Staying tune for yur next chapter…intriguing!..welcome back missy!.
Roby !! girl where you were? I missed you!
Be very welcome !!
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I have not read the story, I’ll read tomorrow, because I had a day job
12 hours and I’m exhausted and read in this state, your story will not
having due regard to what merece.São 18 chapters, and tomorrow
I will give all my attention to this story.
The complete constellation.
A big bear hug !! …
Really happy to see this story wasn’t forgotten, I’ll be looking forward to the next posts!
First of all, let’s take a deep breath.
Our Roby! This chapter was excellent! and you let me
with a sinking heart, that will be the Bette and Tina destination
amid all this, and when Bette says, “I am dead, but it’s not your fault.”, she made me very afraid.
Please! I precisso a happy ending.
The complete constellation.
Bear hug.
glued to every word, describes me right now….I said it once and say it again…Robyn you are amazing….Very entertaining!