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“Hmmm?” Tina put away a piece of garment and turned around to look into the watchful brown eyes. And she instantly melt into the big doe eyes, smiling and shining.
Bette shook her head slightly. “Nothing,” she stood up and approached the lithe body in three strides, taking the blonde into her arms and inhaling the enchanting scent, an act so innate that she seemed to have practiced a million times, “I was just thinking how much I love you here.” “And how much I’d hate to let you go.” “Can I tell you something?” “Can I trust you?”
Tina closed her eyes for a while, just to listen their hearts beating in sync. She wanted to tell her yes, but all the while she also wanted to tell her no. Drawing small circles on the taller woman’s back, she found herself at loss of in the mist of her conflicting thoughts. She wanted to know more, yet she wanted to know nothing.
“Jorge is having a dinner party this Saturday, in honor of the house cleaning.”
“A dinner party?” Tina found it quite suspicious, the way Bette disclosed the information.
The brunette let out a light chuckle, finding the notion of a dinner party in a house like this very silly. “No, not a ‘dinner party’ dinner part.”
“What do you mean?” Out of curiosity, and out of her investigative instinct, Tina had to ask.
This time, there was a sigh. Bette pulled away slightly and went to look out of her window into the garden. She combed a hand through her hair and creased her brows as she processed her thoughts. “It’s a meeting with the Iowa. Jodi’s brother thinks we owe him big time. Basically they give us a list for their capital loss in the house cleaning and we reimburse them with arsons, routes, and new imports.”
It was Tina’s turn to frown. She needed this information. But she never wanted it from Bette. “And you think it’s not just another trap or something of that sorts this time?”
“No, and that’s exactly why I’m worrying.” Bette chewed on her lower lip as she contemplated the possible outcomes for the tenth time. “He’s getting careless.”
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Ok I’m getting a hang of this new design. Come and send me friend requests, write on my wall, or leave messages in my box or something!
I think someone may have noticed that I also pulled down all The Lucky One chapters. That’s because I am doing a major revision. There are a lot of changes. It’s half way through already but I don’t know if you want me to post or wait till it’s all done.
I would love your thoughts, if not on the whole story, but on some small things you like or dislike. Any form of comment will be appreciated.
Peace,
Robyn
Yayyy!!!you’re back! I’m so happy to be reading this story again, I thought you were kidding me when you said you were going to post…ahh!!!…miss you my sister! …….ok I’m going to read the chapter now lol
So glad your back with this story. Enjoyed it, thanks
it’s been so long since you’ve post a new chapter,thanks for this long update!
Ok.. Slightly confused.. I don’t remember when they realized they knew each other from high school… Did I miss something, although I am only on page 5 so maybe it will be explained as I read further..
You might have skipped chapter 2 “Why change your name”? It’s when Bette confronted Tina about her appearance at the mansion. They are pretty sure about each other the entire time.
Welcome back! And you came back with incredible force. But i am a little confused, was Tina really having a nightmare where she shot Bette dead or did she it really and is now in some kind of shock where the reality is escaping her?
Would love to read the chapters you already have from The Lucky One.
Hey so glad your back. Awesome chapter. I can’t wait to read more.
Robyn what a comeback!..great to have you back n this sure is one of those “don’t put it down til ya finish reading it” kinda story..my kinda story!..is Bette really dead?..did Tina narc on Bette?…Staying tune for yur next chapter…intriguing!..welcome back missy!.
Roby !! girl where you were? I missed you!
Be very welcome !!
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Really happy to see this story wasn’t forgotten, I’ll be looking forward to the next posts!
First of all, let’s take a deep breath.
Our Roby! This chapter was excellent! and you let me
with a sinking heart, that will be the Bette and Tina destination
amid all this, and when Bette says, “I am dead, but it’s not your fault.”, she made me very afraid.
Please! I precisso a happy ending.
The complete constellation.
Bear hug.
glued to every word, describes me right now….I said it once and say it again…Robyn you are amazing….Very entertaining!