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Numb: Chapter 6
These were the thought of Bette Porter as she watched the finger squeeze the trigger. She never heard the click of the hammer or felt the gun powder burn her forehead. Bette did however have one last image in her head, one she thought she would never see again…a very alive Dana Fairbanks gasping in the doorway.
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John Anderson nervously twitched as he waited for his backup to come and help. They should be here. He knew something was unquestionably wrong in the apartment of Alice Pieszecki, and if help did not hurry Dana’s family would not survive. His mind drifted through the various scenarios that would lead an agent to not pick up their cell, and his only conclusion was the agent was obviously already dead. Stepping out the vehicle he shot
Turning back to the vehicle he saw that
Taking her steps two at a time, Dana forced her legs to push her up to the well-known third floor apartment. There was no time for waiting game, and the police should have already been here, her fear and impatience had gotten the best of her. Her handler could sit around casting ugly glares and twiddling his thumbs all he wants, but the brunette was an athlete. She was a person of action, and she would not rest until she cradled
Crossing the hall she came to a halt at the familiar green door. Not even bothering to knock she pushed it open and stared into the eyes of a killer.
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Tina rolled over in her bed again, struggling to fall back asleep. She felt unbelievable anger at her wife leaving her without a note or reason. She knew where Bette went; it had been nagging her in the back of the head ever since she woke up to find the older woman gone. Against her wishes, Bette was probably at Shane’s feeling her head with nonsense about Dana still being alive.
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(49 votes, average: 3.65 out of 5)
WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WTF!!!!!!!!!!! post now
oh my…i loved this update…*drools* darn cliffhangers *arrg* although, i leave alot in my writing…but still, arrg! update soon, keep it up!
OH SHIT..PLEASE POST SOON….
omb u hav GOT to post soon!!! luv this story!!!
I dont know if I’ve commented on your story or not, because a lot of the time I’ll read a story real quick with intention of comming back later to comment. Then I forget. I know totally rude. I know as a writer I love the comments. But in case I haven’t told you both your stories are GREAT. And I look daily for updates on both. Thanks for such wonderful story telling and two wonderful stories. The angle in which you discribe Bette’s death was very different and unique, just one example of why your stories stand out. Thanks again and cant wait for the next chapter on both. Deb
My favorite part of this chapter was the begining with Bette, very well written. This was a great update and I really love cliff hangers!
did I tell your brilliant?? I mean who else can kill bette off like that!!that was classic!!!! I’m so fucking happy your back and posting everyday for us. can’t wait to countine on this ride your taking us for.
nice
I have just added you as one of my new fav writers…among the talented and much loved: layla_gray, debs and (I’m bowing here) dreisser. Keep it up. I’m looking forward to the conc. of Cruel Intentions, please post soon. Peace.
Ahhhh! I can’t wait for the next chapter! This is so suspensful. If I were the type to bite my nails, they’d all be gone now. LOL. :)
Bette and her suits…*shakes head* Tsk,tsk..but really funny in a morbidly curious way..*lol* Post soon..leaving us folk dangling isn’t very fair! *pouts dramatically*
oh my god I love it and can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon