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Numbers
Story written on April 15, 2012 by kins40.
And after breakfast, she’d make sure to start on another count.
6.
Bette looked at Tina incredulously. Her wife had not just uttered those words!
Surely, she had imagined it.
There was no way that after all these years, after all what they had been through that Bette would entertain such a request from her wife.
The evening had been perfect. It was date night.
The couple had started this little tradition, shortly after they had rekindled their relationship. They were both committed to making it work and staying connected. This is what those evenings were for.
They had left Angelica with her Auntie Kit. She was to stay there overnight and well into the next day.
The evening was theirs as was the night and all its delightful promises.
But Tina had made her request, one that Bette could not deny her as it had been a condition imposed by Tina when they had got back together.
"Baby," Tina tried to reason with her wife, "You knew I would ask one day!"
Bette sat there downtrodden, overcome with emotions she did not know would overwhelm her so much.
"But…" Bette started a lump in her throat, "Why now?"
"Why not?" Tina retorted softly. She knew her request was asking a lot from Bette and she traded carefully.
"We talked about it… at length," Tina continued taking her wife’s hand in hers. Her thumb rubbed lightly over the top of Bette’s hand in a comforting, cajoling effort. "And you said you would allow it."
"I know I did… I know I did." Bette said in a near superhuman effort.
Her brow knitted, as her mind processed Tina’s words.
The blonde wanted to …. God, she could barely say the word…. and to top it all with one of her …. friends!
Well Bette did consider them, so far, as friends…
Tina wanted to, …. to put it in no other word… she wanted to ….share!
The thought, as it materialised in her head, made Bette’s head swirl. She felt sick at the image which appeared in her head.
Tina wanted one of her friends.
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Wow..just amazing!
All three…..just beautiful. Your writing is amazing! On the 3rd one, I guessed correctly before Tina. Your imagination is so creative. Love your writing. :-)
Loving this series :-)
The last one made me tear up. LOL. More please. You’re stories are always wonderful.
Kins my dear, you do have the most fascinating imagination that I’ve ever come across. And you are creating the most womderful vignettes from the numbers given you. I am truly impressed. Will we ever get another story, years in the future of our girls from the Savanah? Thanks.
That was great… Really cute, especially the last one :) Thanks for posting.
Damn all of them are good!…but I like the 52 best..very clever Kins40!.. BRAVO!!!
BRAVA! This series is simply awesome. May your Muse never cease to inspire and move you to create and share these lovely, well-written pieces. Thanks a bunch, kins! Cheers! =)
BRAVA! This series is simply awesome. May your Muse never cease to inspire and move you to create and share these lovely, well-written pieces. Thanks a bunch, kins! Cheers! =)
In the words of Yoda: Too fu….. cute.
That was simply wonderful and what an imaginative mind you have. All 3 stories were absolutely amazing. Thank you.
You rock K!!!! Thank you for these amazing stories 😘
Woooowww beautiful, 6 was hysterical!!!
Amazing, imaginative and captivating as always. Thanks for using my submission #52 in such a sweet love story. I happen to enjoy doing crossword puzzles so that made it even more special. Looking forward to reading more of your Numbers.
Wow Kins!! :-) such a marvelous update!! And you are so creative and romantic! It’s a wonderful idea ;-) especially when your other half loves crosswords too hehe… Thanks Kins for making my morning! ;-) enjoy your day!
Amazing.Thank you.PPS
Wow, that one was excellent. Not that I dodn’t like the others they were great too :)Looking forward to whatever you write next.
I absolutely love all your numbers. There is an infinite numbers of scene and so looking forward to it. Thank you so much for sharing.
brilliant,you had me worried with 6, but hilarious in the end and 52 was amazing what an imagination you have,more soon please……….x
I loved them all, but 52 was very clever. You’re so amazing. Thanks!
I loved it, thank you kins40! And thank you for using my favorite number in the first chapter. It’s uncanny because I really love stories about Bette and Tina in their later years, and there aren’t that many. Thank you for this gift. :D
I loved numbers, but I loved yours more. Thanks
Sigh… simply, wonderful everyone of these Kins :) It’s a testament to what a talented writer you are that you can pack so much into three lovely vignettes. And for once I did NOT fall for your ruse in 6. Looking forward to your next installment! xx iHH.
…. me again, just read Janbear’s comment on infinite number of scenes which has me wondering – did anyone choose “infinity” for their number??? Are we allowed to suggest other numbers or is your “request line” closed ;)
I’ll say it again…you are a GENIUS! Your imagination just makes me so very happy my dear.