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Numbers
Story written on April 15, 2012 by kins40.
No! She did not want, she desired.
Bette let her head fall forward and her gaze fell on her dessert plate.
She eyed the perfect selection of 6 miniature treats on the long rectangular white plate.
Perfectly square little Mille-feuille with chequered icing on the top, light and fluffy custard filled and chocolate covered chou pastry of a delightful profiterole, the almost indecent ruby red swirls in the triangle shaped cheesecake, the beautiful tulip shaped glass displaying a tantalising trio of chocolate mousse, the flawlessly glazed little apple tart with its thinly sliced apple and quenelle of rich decadent fresh cream and finally the lemon rind speckled icy sorbet scoop resting delicately on a crisp almond tuile.
Bette’s eyes lifted back up, shiny with unshed tears.
"Baby," Tina started, "You know I love you and it won’t make any difference between us…. but you did agree to it."
A pregnant silence fell between them, heavy with meaning and consequences.
Bette’s jaw clenched when she asked her question fearing the answer.
"Which one?"
A beaming smile appeared on Tina’s face as she barely managed to hold a little squeal of delight.
"I’ll have the cheesecake ..please!"
52.
"Are you comfortable?" Tina asked tilting her head back to look at Bette who was sitting behind her on their sofa.
The blonde lay in between her girlfriend’s legs, her back resting against Bette’s front. The gallery owner’s right leg was wrapped around Tina’s, the top of her foot was grazing the underside of the much shorter woman’s limb.
It was a soothing and pleasant action, one which spoke volume of their physical closeness.
Bette’s arm snaked around Tina’s waist, sneaking deftly under the blonde’s top to caress her taut belly for just a moment and rest just above the waistband of her sweats.
"I am now," Bette whispered back, pulling the younger woman closer into her, ever so subtly pushing her pelvis into the blonde’s back.
She sighed at the pleasurable feeling but willed herself to stay still because right now, the moment was all about Tina.
"Have you stopped fidgeting?" Tina asked with mock annoyance, having definitely felt the light nudge from the brunette but wanting first of all to indulge into their Sunday morning ritual.
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Wow..just amazing!
All three…..just beautiful. Your writing is amazing! On the 3rd one, I guessed correctly before Tina. Your imagination is so creative. Love your writing. :-)
Loving this series :-)
The last one made me tear up. LOL. More please. You’re stories are always wonderful.
Kins my dear, you do have the most fascinating imagination that I’ve ever come across. And you are creating the most womderful vignettes from the numbers given you. I am truly impressed. Will we ever get another story, years in the future of our girls from the Savanah? Thanks.
That was great… Really cute, especially the last one :) Thanks for posting.
Damn all of them are good!…but I like the 52 best..very clever Kins40!.. BRAVO!!!
BRAVA! This series is simply awesome. May your Muse never cease to inspire and move you to create and share these lovely, well-written pieces. Thanks a bunch, kins! Cheers! =)
BRAVA! This series is simply awesome. May your Muse never cease to inspire and move you to create and share these lovely, well-written pieces. Thanks a bunch, kins! Cheers! =)
In the words of Yoda: Too fu….. cute.
That was simply wonderful and what an imaginative mind you have. All 3 stories were absolutely amazing. Thank you.
You rock K!!!! Thank you for these amazing stories 😘
Woooowww beautiful, 6 was hysterical!!!
Amazing, imaginative and captivating as always. Thanks for using my submission #52 in such a sweet love story. I happen to enjoy doing crossword puzzles so that made it even more special. Looking forward to reading more of your Numbers.
Wow Kins!! :-) such a marvelous update!! And you are so creative and romantic! It’s a wonderful idea ;-) especially when your other half loves crosswords too hehe… Thanks Kins for making my morning! ;-) enjoy your day!
Amazing.Thank you.PPS
Wow, that one was excellent. Not that I dodn’t like the others they were great too :)Looking forward to whatever you write next.
I absolutely love all your numbers. There is an infinite numbers of scene and so looking forward to it. Thank you so much for sharing.
brilliant,you had me worried with 6, but hilarious in the end and 52 was amazing what an imagination you have,more soon please……….x
I loved them all, but 52 was very clever. You’re so amazing. Thanks!
I loved it, thank you kins40! And thank you for using my favorite number in the first chapter. It’s uncanny because I really love stories about Bette and Tina in their later years, and there aren’t that many. Thank you for this gift. :D
I loved numbers, but I loved yours more. Thanks
Sigh… simply, wonderful everyone of these Kins :) It’s a testament to what a talented writer you are that you can pack so much into three lovely vignettes. And for once I did NOT fall for your ruse in 6. Looking forward to your next installment! xx iHH.
…. me again, just read Janbear’s comment on infinite number of scenes which has me wondering – did anyone choose “infinity” for their number??? Are we allowed to suggest other numbers or is your “request line” closed ;)
I’ll say it again…you are a GENIUS! Your imagination just makes me so very happy my dear.