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Story written on April 22, 2012 by kins40.
I feel her shifting above me, her body contorting as the room is suddenly flooded with light.
I look up and see her smiling at me, sheepishly.
"I don’t want to hide anymore," she says almost shyly, "Not from you."
I smile back, making my way up again, never leaving her gaze as I settle myself once again in between her parted legs. She welcomes me, wrapping her arms and legs around me, holding me tightly.
"You are amazing and I love you so much," She whispers in the crook of my neck, "Thank you."
We stay like this for a few more minutes relishing our new found closeness.
"Bette?" I hear her call softly.
"Yes, baby?"
"Make love to me"
23.
The road was deserted, extending for miles on end, as only the immensity of the new world could afford.
It had been raining, long and hard, water teeming down from the Heavens and turning the road into a makeshift shallow river, water gathering into puddles in the dips in the imperfect tarmac.
The Lexus spun on the wet surface and as skilled a driver as she was, Bette could do nothing to control the car as it careered toward the iconic telegraph pole.
In the passenger seat, Tina held onto the dashboard, terrified as she saw the inevitable approach at great speed.
Life slowed down in the few seconds that followed.
The car slid and spun round and round, drawing black circle shapes on the road, with the rubber of its locked wheels.
With each revolution the car completed, each woman saw how the wooden telegraph pole inched its way, sadistically closer.
The momentum was merciless and it would only stop when the car hit the pole.
And it did.
Hitting passenger side first surrounding the two women with deafening sounds of glass shattering, metal screeching and twisting as the car wrapped itself neatly around the telegraph pole.
Plying easily, compacting quickly and forcing the carefully thought out interior of the luxury SUV to rearrange itself, but this time metal was competing with the introduction of flesh, bone and the wood of the utility pole.
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Kins, your writing never ceases to amaze me! Loved that 45 was a mini epilogue to Savannah. As usual, I am looking forward to your next installment. Thanks Kins!
Your stories just keep getting better and better! Thanks so much for revisiting Africa..so amazing!
Yay! A return to the savanna. Glad you turned that middle one into a dream, cuz I was about to abandon ship, but geez – Bette needs to eat milder food before bed. What a dream.
I don’t think I can live without my Sunday tradition. Relaxing day, reading great stories. Thank you for the beautiful stories and for considering/using my number. 15 was my brothers birthdate. We were gay siblings, and he was an awesome brother and human being. Thank you K😘
Thank you for your gift to us. Such talent.
So happy you posted…this was so great…hope to read more updates for Savannah…but any story that you create is pretty fantastic…
Thanks Kins for another fabulous update ;-) though 23 almost got me there.. Phew glad it’s only bad dream in the ff world :-D lol.. Looks like raining and cold propelled your nc17 writing mood.. But knowing you feel miserable because of that, may I suggest you to come to the tropic here and enjoy warm weather all along? some said its not warm but hot, but it’s sunny for sure ;-) and maybe it will highlight your mood into sunny mood also :-) hehe.. So glad to have a glimpse of savannah and such a wonderful news to celebrate :-) I simply enjoy reading your story, so sure I’ll re-read them again ;-) thanks again Kins!!
Amazing.Thank you.
Amazing as always. Loved the tiny glimpse of the Savannah life.
Brilliant as always
Okay, first – very sweet. Second – grrrr! You made me cry (I was hoping it was a bad dream but still…), Third – yippee, a reprise to our beloved Savannah (happy dance). Another trio of finely written stories Kins! You ROCK – and no worries about the infinity thing ;). Here’s wishing you bright, warm and sunny days soon! iHH xx
Amazing as usual. Cant wait for the next installment
Thank you, excellent stories esp. with the second one keeping us on the edge of our seat. REALLY enjoyed the trip back to Savannah. You could continue that amazing story anytime…
That was just simply beautiful. Thank you for these wonderful stories. I am so amazed with your creative mind. Thank you again.
Ohhhh I looovvveeddd 45!!! U know Savannah is my favorite story. Don’t know if it’s too late to submit a number but I had an idea since I haven’t seen anything like it before, how about something involving Bette and Tina dealing with a rebellious teenaged daughter (namely Angie lol) the number could be 49
Awww!
Love your beautiful mind Kins. Happy you brought Savanna back. Thanks!
Great story – loved the part with the Savannah story in it.
The first story, kind of hot ..but at the same time…gentle and sweet. Second…I almost …well what can i say?…I can’t see any one of them dying..but at the end she woke up?….I said “thanked god it’s just a dream” ….and your last…glad to see what they are now…and Ellie having an Admirer. While they are waiting for their first born. thanks Kins40.
So wish you’d pick up a pen and give us some more Savannah.