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Bette drags her feet with the baby thing because sometimes she’s afraid that she’s a *****-up when it comes to love and she’s terrified of pedestals. She convinces herself that she’ll love any child she takes into her care, and more than that, she wouldn’t be able to help loving any child that Tina gave birth to.
It’s still there, though, that need to please and the fear of rejection, dissatisfaction.
VII.
Tina breaks habits. It’s what she’s good at. She cured Bette’s habit of eating sticky white bread because wheat bread is healthier. She worked on the smoking thing next, and that one was easy enough to kick, as long as Bette had something else to put her mouth on. She was too late on one of them, but maybe it couldn’t be avoided-she tried as hard as she could to cure Bette’s habit of reading in the dark, but they had to get her reading glasses anyway.
There are some that she’s sure she’ll never cure. She tried to make her quit swearing so much; it was a quarter in the jar every time she cursed. All this left Tina with, though, was fifteen bucks and a headache from the many creative words Bette had come up with as substitutes.
It had been a good week, though, owing mostly to Bette’s other habit of joining Tina in the shower and pressing her against the wall, fingers thrusting inside her until she whimpered and shuddered.
Tina breaks habits, but some habits are too good to be broken.
VIII.
Bette values honesty but she doesn’t practice it most of the time and there are times when Tina really isn’t sure whether or not she’s being lied to. She doesn’t have a suspicious mind; that’s the whole problem, in fact, because she’s far too trusting and most people would think that long hours at the office rarely have anything to do with work.
But Tina knows Bette and she’s never entertained the idea of Bette cheating on her. She’s accepted this; she’s accepted that she entered into a relationship with Bette and Bette’s job and that she can’t have one without the other. It’s a strange threesome to be living in, but she doesn’t mind it because she loves Bette and Bette loves her job, so she must love Bette’s job, too.
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Dare I say this piece, these pieces is/are revolutionary, the stream of consciousness that is Tina and Bette and their relationship. Gorgeous, cerebral and intuitive as is your great talent. I truly look forward to your next offering. By the way I can’t help but opine that not all of B&T has been told…
Beautiful and moving. That’s all I can say.
4, 7, 8, 9, 13, 14, 18, 19, and 22. Enough said.
Oh, wow. Oh, wow. Oh, wow.
Ohsofuckingamazingwow!!! To state that you blow me is so not a command but a sheer lack of appropriate words of praise. To say that you move me doesn’t even do it justice when I just saw the whole Bette-and-Tina thing at the speed of light.
And WOW! is all that I can manage for now.
are you jenny? your writing style reminds me of her – that’s a compliment. You are so complex but, true to emotion in your writing. Absolutelyfuckinamazing! Great stuff!
That was absolutely, positively gorgeous. Thank you for sharing. You’re very talented :)
I wish I could write like this. Your words are so simple yet spellbinding. Loved the pieces where neither one felt complete while sleeping. The bond that you weave through the pieces were strong and so…Bette and Tina. :)
very nicely done! thanks!
that was awesome! thanks!
Your work is stunning. I am completely blown away by your talent. Thank you for sharing.
beautiful.
I’m a little late in the game with your writing, but this was…this was…WOW! I love it. Truly amazing.