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She also knows that it would be easy; if the words “I’m scared” would just stop getting stuck in her ***** throat, it would be so easy. Kit has all the answers, most of the time, but it’s tricky getting them, because Bette has to put so much of herself on the line and she doesn’t know how willing she is to do that.
Telling Tina has barely crossed her mind; it just doesn’t make sense. She’s not sure why it doesn’t make sense, but it doesn’t. Sure, she knows that Tina would understand. She knows that Tina would probably say it’s okay. She knows that Tina would tell her there’s nothing to be afraid of and it’s okay to make mistakes and she’ll love her no matter what.
She knows Tina will say this. She’s just scared.
XII.
Dan Foxworthy is a dickhead.
If Dan Foxworthy ***** understands Tina so ***** well, why the ***** isn’t he married to her? Why isn’t Tina carrying Dan Foxworthy’s ***** baby? Or Oscar’s? Or any of those group therapy *****?
Tina says Bette’s being ridiculous, like this is a valid complaint. “You’re being ridiculous; stop it.” Tina thinks that Bette’s pride is getting in the way of her admitting that group therapy is a worthwhile experience. “I think it’s good for us, I do.”
Tina thinks Dan Foxworthy is so smart and was so right when he pointed out Bette’s insecurity issues. Tina thinks that if Bette would just give therapy an actual, real chance, she’d realize that Dan Foxworthy wants to help them.
***** Dan Foxworthy, Bette thinks.
Dan Foxworthy is a dickhead.
XIII.
Tina admires Bette. Really, Tina loves Bette, and there’s a certain amount of admiration in her love for Bette. She thinks Bette is good at handling conflict and she thinks Bette is strong and smart.
Maybe she’s just not as good as Bette is at not thinking about things, though. She’s tried. It works for most of the day because she has things to keep her occupied-she suspects Bette has called their friends and put them on a schedule to keep an eye on her when Bette can’t.
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Dare I say this piece, these pieces is/are revolutionary, the stream of consciousness that is Tina and Bette and their relationship. Gorgeous, cerebral and intuitive as is your great talent. I truly look forward to your next offering. By the way I can’t help but opine that not all of B&T has been told…
Beautiful and moving. That’s all I can say.
4, 7, 8, 9, 13, 14, 18, 19, and 22. Enough said.
Oh, wow. Oh, wow. Oh, wow.
Ohsofuckingamazingwow!!! To state that you blow me is so not a command but a sheer lack of appropriate words of praise. To say that you move me doesn’t even do it justice when I just saw the whole Bette-and-Tina thing at the speed of light.
And WOW! is all that I can manage for now.
are you jenny? your writing style reminds me of her – that’s a compliment. You are so complex but, true to emotion in your writing. Absolutelyfuckinamazing! Great stuff!
That was absolutely, positively gorgeous. Thank you for sharing. You’re very talented :)
I wish I could write like this. Your words are so simple yet spellbinding. Loved the pieces where neither one felt complete while sleeping. The bond that you weave through the pieces were strong and so…Bette and Tina. :)
very nicely done! thanks!
that was awesome! thanks!
Your work is stunning. I am completely blown away by your talent. Thank you for sharing.
beautiful.
I’m a little late in the game with your writing, but this was…this was…WOW! I love it. Truly amazing.