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Chapter 12
Tina
How could you describe a vertical free falling of ten thousand feet from the sky…. I can’t…. and that’s what I’m feeling right now….. not just because of the song…. or Oh my god…. the lyric…. but also because of the nearness of her body…. of her mouth brushing tenderly on my ear…. whispering those precious words….. her warm breath rolling down my neck….. how can you fall for someone so hard…. and so fast… the song ended a few moments ago and I can’t let her go…. I don’t think I’ll ever can…. and I can’t look into her eyes either…. I’m too scared of what she might see…..
Bette
I’m whispering the lyric of the song to her now…. I’m opening my heart…. I’m surrendering everything to her…. And I can’t believe it…. I Bette Porter, slow dancing with the most beautiful woman on earth…. telling her that I need her…. that I’m falling in love…. and most important…. i’m trusting her, putting my soul in her hands…. letting her decide.
And then the song is over and I don’t want this to end… I so hope for her not to run away again…. please….I beg you, take the chance…. let me show you how you make me
feel….
After a moment the heat and the tension between them…. and the urge to speak, to day what was going through their minds became unbearable…. so they both broke up the tight embrace….
Tina: (with her eyes filled with tears) what can I say when you’ve already said everything?
Bette: (releasing a small giggle) well…. how about….. would you kiss me?
Tina: you don’t need to ask me that….
Bette: (and we began kissing…. oh boy…. at first tenderly and slowly but after I brushed my tongue against her lips asking for permission, my temperature began raising as our bodies couldn’t be tighter… passion was our language now, neither of us could help it…. so I broke up the kiss from the urge to take her right there on that dance floor and when I looked into her eyes I saw the same….) Tina… not here… not so soon…. I need to let go of you now or I won’t be able to control myself….
Tina: (I understood why she was telling me this…. but I resented it at the same time) ok… you’re right….
Bette: why don’t we go for a walk… or something. I think that the seabreeze could help….
Tina: yeah… definitely….
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tins tell us what you really want!!!!!!! post now
they should kiss again, and stay in the cabin for a week, now…post soon
Tina doesnt mince her word,or what she wants. Thanks
IM only just catching up with your story…and i love it…so come on Tina dont let that hottie wait too long!!lol looking forward to more…thanks
Bette should have said, “promises, promises, or kill me now.” Great chapter and I wish that they would just get on with it. Thanks for the post.
anne…please post soon…this story is wonderful and I can’t wait to see where it all goes…
Fantastic scene, chapter, story!!!! i luv em. please post more soon you are great!!!!
Fantastic scene, chapter, story!!!! i luv em. please post more soon you are great!!!!
Good chapter. They are beautiful couple and sweet. Now Tina said what she want and just wait for Bette. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Tina seems to have decided that she knows very well what and who she wants. That was very stimulating.
quick bette kiss her again… that was beautiful… i’m so glad you can write… i just can’t… i cant bring myself to it… hopefully soon… but please continue
Gee, Tina seems pretty clear about what she wants. What are they waiting for? In fact, there next date should simply be to meet in one or the other’s state room-cut out the middle man so to speak. Waiting for your next post. funnyone-the server decided to take away my name-that faceless machine. Rage against it!
Yes Amanda is right. Bette should kiss Tina again RIGHT NOW. It’s times like these I wish my job wasn’t boring so I wouldn’t read knowing I can’t take a cold shower here.
Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
Excellent chapter!! it`s amaizing see how this two are hook. Definitly i can see that tina is so clear in her feellings about Bette. Post soon
I hope Tina means what she just said and don’t feel the opposite in the morning, because that would surely kill Bette….I love this story and the way you write :o))
Wow! Great story! I just caught up! I’m glad they didn’t sleep together right after they met. . and their first date, leaves something to the imagination, rigt? Please post again soon!