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The mail deck
Bette: (we were holding hands and although the seabreeze was quite cold I couldn’t cool down) well… here we are…. again….
Tina: (grinning) I guess you could really say we’re working backwards here….
Bette: (laughing) you could say that…. actually I’m thinking about buying the cruise for our first anniversary….
Tina: (oh… how could you fall twice for someone in less than ten minutes?!!) well… you’re confident, aren’t you?!
Bette: look I don’t know where this is going to…. but after what happened there…. on that dance floor I’m not scared anymore…. because I know now that it was inevitable…
Tina: (with a questioning face) what was inevitable?
Bette: (looking intensely into Tina’s eyes) to fall in love with you….
Tina: (and there goes the third time I thought…… so I had to do it, I had to kiss her…. and I did)
Bette: (after saying those word Tina ended the already short distance between us… kissing me so hard that I almost loose my balance… I have to have her… were the only five word my mind kept repeating)
Tina: (my hands were out of control… touching every inch of her, from the base of her head until the very end of her back…. and beyond….)
Bette: (when her hands began to touch my back… mines started acting on their own drawing with one of them the soft line of her jaw…. and the other one was already covering the left side of her body, slightly brushing her breast… god… I was on the edge and when she reached my butt…. I had to break the kiss… again… oh god give me the strength…)
Tina: I’m sorry… did I…
Bette: oh, no…. you were doing a fine job there believe me… but I can’t… not until you’re sure of this… of us…. this is the hardest thing I’ve ever done, believe me…
Tina: (with lust written all over her face) well… this is hard for me too… you take my word on that….
So they kept talking, and walking…. stealing glances and soft kisses from each other until very late in the evening….
Bette: (looking at her watch) Oh my god! It’s three am… I think we should call it a night….
Tina: yes… this has been quite a day…. would you walk me to my suite?
Bette: well, that’s risky but I think I’ll take my chances….
Once they were at Tina’s door…
Tina: I’m not going to ask you to come in…. because I know that we won’t be able to get a hold from one another…. so I guess this is good night…
Bette: yes, but first (moving closer) I need my good night kiss (with pleading puppy eyes)
Tina: you weren’t going anywhere without one of those anyway… (and I kissed her with everything I had…. and she did the same… after a few minutes when breathing became an issue I broke the kiss)
Bette: wow!! You sure know how to keep me coming back for more….
Tina: I swear to you Bette Porter… that the next time we kiss like that I won’t mind where we are or whom we are with…. I will drag your ass to this suite… and mark my words…. I won’t let you out of here… at least for a week….
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tins tell us what you really want!!!!!!! post now
they should kiss again, and stay in the cabin for a week, now…post soon
Tina doesnt mince her word,or what she wants. Thanks
IM only just catching up with your story…and i love it…so come on Tina dont let that hottie wait too long!!lol looking forward to more…thanks
Bette should have said, “promises, promises, or kill me now.” Great chapter and I wish that they would just get on with it. Thanks for the post.
anne…please post soon…this story is wonderful and I can’t wait to see where it all goes…
Fantastic scene, chapter, story!!!! i luv em. please post more soon you are great!!!!
Fantastic scene, chapter, story!!!! i luv em. please post more soon you are great!!!!
Good chapter. They are beautiful couple and sweet. Now Tina said what she want and just wait for Bette. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Tina seems to have decided that she knows very well what and who she wants. That was very stimulating.
quick bette kiss her again… that was beautiful… i’m so glad you can write… i just can’t… i cant bring myself to it… hopefully soon… but please continue
Gee, Tina seems pretty clear about what she wants. What are they waiting for? In fact, there next date should simply be to meet in one or the other’s state room-cut out the middle man so to speak. Waiting for your next post. funnyone-the server decided to take away my name-that faceless machine. Rage against it!
Yes Amanda is right. Bette should kiss Tina again RIGHT NOW. It’s times like these I wish my job wasn’t boring so I wouldn’t read knowing I can’t take a cold shower here.
Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
Excellent chapter!! it`s amaizing see how this two are hook. Definitly i can see that tina is so clear in her feellings about Bette. Post soon
I hope Tina means what she just said and don’t feel the opposite in the morning, because that would surely kill Bette….I love this story and the way you write :o))
Wow! Great story! I just caught up! I’m glad they didn’t sleep together right after they met. . and their first date, leaves something to the imagination, rigt? Please post again soon!