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one consenting adult part 2( sequel to parenting)
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I tightened my grip on her waist when I felt her start to slip away. I didnt want another occurrence of her fighting to get away. Well not until we reached the inside of her house. It took ten minutes to get across the walkway and into the front door. She struggled with hopping up the steps until I lifted her up the last two. I couldnt tell if it was from pain or nervousness when she muttered oh god while fumbling with the keys. I placed my hand over hers to steady the metal sliding into the hole.
“Thanks,” she sighed.
I opened the door and gawked at the huge photograph sitting on the left wall. A naked woman swimming in a pool seeming to balance a small child in the palm of her hands.
“Oh yeah, that… thats me and my mother. I think I was seven years old in that picture. Im not really sure.”
“Its beautiful,” I awed over it.
“Why thank you,” a voice said behind us.
I spun around forgetting that I still had Evan by the waist.
“Whoa, whoa… Serena, Im still attached here,” Evan said grabbing my shoulder.
I had turned to look into the face identical to Evans.
“Hi, Im Evans mother,” she introduced.
I cocked my head to the side in confusion.
“No, thats not me in the photograph. Thats my wife.”
“Serena Sutherland,” I said smiling.
“The new neighbor,” Evan included.
“Nice to meet you. Why are you holding onto my daughter like that?”
“She…”
“I was being a klutz and fell spraining my ankle,” Evan explained.
“Like mother, like daughter,” another voice said.
A blonde walked in behind the first woman. The lady in the picture.
“Hi neighbor, Im Tina and this is Bette,” she smiled.
“Hi.”
“I would shake your hand but I see that they are full at the moment.”
I didnt even realize I was still holding onto Evan.
“Uh, yeah… I guess I should put you down somewhere,” I said to Evan.
“Uhuh.”
We made our way to the couch and eased her down. I lifted up her leg, resting it on a pillow.
“Better?”
“Yeah, thanks.”
As a phone rang off in the background and Bette going in search of it, Tina thanked me for taking care of her daughter.
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Damm Serena is hot, and her comment on leaving the show is this because I’m a lesbian?? WTF my jaw hit the ground and it’s still kinda open even now. Why can’t I have any hot neighbors. They have shane and serena and I get a fat old man who stares, and some lady who is never home. So how old is evan cause this is a different story so she could be older.
What a great crossover! I really like this!! Rock on! (P.S. I followed you perfectly!)
Serena huh?..well done Evan..lol..and i bet Bette feels something about it..lol..great chapter as always..post soon
Why are you portraying an adult woman being attracted to a minor?
Not cool.
Is Evan jailbait in this story?I like the introduction of Serena. More drama on the way.
Good thing you included the last little bit…. Becuase I kept saying What? throughout the story
becuase it didn’t make any sense as far as being realistic or well it was a little contraversial
……the fact that Evan is 15 and the neighbor is at least 24…unless she’s like Dougie Houser…which I doubt.lol
I really like your writing stylistically…especially on the first page.
Good Chapter.
I love it!! Serena Sutherland was my favorite character on Law and Order!! I hope you update soon!!!
when i saw your update , the first thing i did was to check how many pages i got to read. and when i saw 4 i was really happy. special ed raised a good point because up until the last part i was wondering if you went ahead of time and didnt say anything. but its not uncommon for an older person to feel for a younger person just know that you have to control it. great story. keep em coming
K
Great story. Don’t know who the law and order chick is :) but I like it. Can’t wait for more.
ok i get that evan is a minor, but shes knows what shes doing.bette and tina are years apart in age.
Great Chapter. I like how you included Serena. Her departure from L&O was so abrupt…now we get to see a little more of her. Yay! Can’t wait to see where you take us. Thanks for another great one and please post soon.
now i wish i watched that show.. but tell us how old even is again…i like this story