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one consenting adult part 2( sequel to parenting)
“Hows your ankle?”
“Sore,” Evan answered folding her legs.
She couldnt seem to place her ankle at the right angle to relieve the pain. I set my cards down, lifting her ankle and setting it across my thighs. I picked up my cards.
“Ill take three,” Shane said sliding her previous cards across the middle.
“Wait… anty up,” Dana instructed.
We all threw five dollars in the pot.
“Uh… two. No, one… no two… for me,” Tina decided.
“Ill take one,” Bette said.
“Me, too,” I said picking up the card Alice dealt me.
I glanced at my cards then quickly resumed my watch of everyone else.
“What did you study?”
Bettes question broke my watch.
“Law.”
“Youre a lawyer?” Tina asked.
“Yeah.”
“Private practice?”
“I was a ADA.”
“ADA?”
“Was?”
“Assistant district attorney. I… was fired,” I revealed.
“What for?” Dana asked leaning forward.
She was looking for scandal. As were the rest of them.
“I thought it was because I was a *****…”
“Youre not a ***** anymore?” from Shane.
“Yes, I am a *****,” I smiled, ” but I was dismissed because as my boss told me I tend to feel for the defendant more than fight for the prosecution. Prosecuting is cold. No feeling… no remorse. I think was the way he put it. I really dont remember.”
“Can he do that?” Alice asked.
“He is the boss and I didnt fight it because I knew he was right. He told me I always advocated for the criminals. That I did.”
“So what are you going to do now?” Tina asked.
“Well unpack, take a little time for myself and then look for a job.”
“You still want to be a lawyer?”
That question came from Evan.
I turned in her direction, looking at her.
“Yeah. I like being a lawyer.”
“Its on you, Dane.”
“Im raising… five more.”
“Im out,” Alice said throwing her cards down.
“In,” Tina threw in a chip.
“Okay…okay… me, too.”
“Ten more,” I said throwing in the blue chip.
“To rich for me,” Tina said.
“Me, too.”
“Nope…Im out.”
Only me and Bette left. She eyed me trying to seep into my thoughts. If only she knew I was thinking about her daughters leg in my lap.
“Im in. And I raise you… twenty more.”
The sound of the chips falling on the others echoed in my head as Evan leaned in closer to see my hand. I shuddered when her arm touched mine. I tried to concentrate on Bette. Looking for a clue on what she held in her hand.
“Serena?”
My head snapped toward Alice.
“You in or out?”
I looked down at my hand and then at the table.
“Im in… Im in.”
I added the twenty dollars in chips to the pile.
“Queen high flush,” Bette announced laying her cards on the table.
“You got me,” I conceded folding my hand.
“What you got?” Shane asked.
“Ten high flush.”
“All right, Bette,” Alice shouted slapping a high five with her friend.
The cheers went around the table.
“Youll get her next time,” she whispered in my ear.
Next time? I was trying to survive her being this close to me. Let alone beating her mother in cards.
Dana stood up from the table and stretched.
“Anyone hungry?” she asked.
“Starving… pizza or Chinese?” Alice asked.
“Pizza.”
“Pizza.”
“Serena?” she asked me with her hand on shoulder.
“Pizza is fine with me,” my voice cracked.
“Okay then… Dana grab the phone,” Tina said.
I listened as Tina order three pies and felt Evans hand travel lower. I took a deep breath.
“Wheres the bathroom?” I jumped up.
“Around the corner, first door on your left,” Shane instructed.
“Thanks.”
I rushed into the bathroom locking the door. I leaned against the door trying to control my nerves. I walked over to the sink and ran the water, splashing some on my face.
“Shes to young. Shes to young,” I repeated to myself.
My thoughts turned to her hand on my back.
“Snap out of it. Shes your neighbors daughter. They would kill me for thinking these thoughts. Bette would surely kill me,” I muttered to my reflection.
“Cmon, Serena. Were starting another hand,” Alice knocked on the door.
I took a deep breath and pushed off the sink. I was the adult. I controlled me. I opened the door and stepped out for another hand of poker.
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Damm Serena is hot, and her comment on leaving the show is this because I’m a lesbian?? WTF my jaw hit the ground and it’s still kinda open even now. Why can’t I have any hot neighbors. They have shane and serena and I get a fat old man who stares, and some lady who is never home. So how old is evan cause this is a different story so she could be older.
What a great crossover! I really like this!! Rock on! (P.S. I followed you perfectly!)
Serena huh?..well done Evan..lol..and i bet Bette feels something about it..lol..great chapter as always..post soon
Why are you portraying an adult woman being attracted to a minor?
Not cool.
Is Evan jailbait in this story?I like the introduction of Serena. More drama on the way.
Good thing you included the last little bit…. Becuase I kept saying What? throughout the story
becuase it didn’t make any sense as far as being realistic or well it was a little contraversial
……the fact that Evan is 15 and the neighbor is at least 24…unless she’s like Dougie Houser…which I doubt.lol
I really like your writing stylistically…especially on the first page.
Good Chapter.
I love it!! Serena Sutherland was my favorite character on Law and Order!! I hope you update soon!!!
when i saw your update , the first thing i did was to check how many pages i got to read. and when i saw 4 i was really happy. special ed raised a good point because up until the last part i was wondering if you went ahead of time and didnt say anything. but its not uncommon for an older person to feel for a younger person just know that you have to control it. great story. keep em coming
K
Great story. Don’t know who the law and order chick is :) but I like it. Can’t wait for more.
ok i get that evan is a minor, but shes knows what shes doing.bette and tina are years apart in age.
Great Chapter. I like how you included Serena. Her departure from L&O was so abrupt…now we get to see a little more of her. Yay! Can’t wait to see where you take us. Thanks for another great one and please post soon.
now i wish i watched that show.. but tell us how old even is again…i like this story